Concept revision for SchreberMeister in view of possible brand name change. Large version attached.
over 1 year ago
Looks great Ema
I love the horizontal layout!
Great type Ema. Digging the horizontal.
@Joe, Herson, Mathieu Thanks guys!
@Matt & Michael It does help with legibility, doesn't it :)
eventually I got it. At first I thought it said 'Card Jens' in a bottle. Really like it though! cute idea!
Must shape the G a bit better then, eh :)
I really like the progression of this project. You've nailed the style, you just need to keep tweaking details. Like others, I'm digging the horizontal format.
great lookin also
The horizontal definitely works better—not only with fitting the lettering in, but just in relating more to the product. Great work, Ema.
Thanks Florin, Mark!
WOW!!! So small but, epic!!
very very nice.
Really love this version Emma! :) was actually thinking horizontal would look awesome, and there it is! nice stuff
Thanks Luke - actually lots of thanks, for all your help! If you were slightly closer than a continent away I'd give you a big smooch :)
oolala ;) haha no prob Ema! glad to have been helpful
Beautiful, Ema. I like this version too. They're both great. Just my thought, maybe you don't need that curly separation line between "Garden" and "in a". It actually made me confused at first since my eyes read it as an "l". I think the gap and the bigger size "in" are enough. But this is just my opinion.
Another thought, are the product themselves (these gardens in bottles), are they created in standing-up or laid-down bottles? I think this is one of those logos that actually giving suggestions of how the actual products look like. Including the orientation. But again, both are marvelous.
Really dig this over the others Ema. Message in a Bottle!
@Inka: I agree - I'll get rid of it when I vectorise; unfortunately my eraser didn't cope with it very well so I left it there in the sketch.
Re position, these gardens are sometimes horizontal (like this sketch), but more often than not are actually vertical, with the plants coming out of the cut bottle bottom. I suppose it's doable as a logo, but the bottle would be really difficult to recognise as such in that position.
I really like what you did here, altho I think it would be better to keep the word 'Gardens' as one.. Just a thought ;-)
I did try keeping the "gardens" together at first, but single it just didnt work out. However, if the client goes with this name I'll definitely have another go at it with a more legible approach. It's a process :)
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