Gardens Sketch #1

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  1. Pro Ema Hoffmann | Limeshot Ema Hoffmann | Limeshot

    Concept revision for SchreberMeister in view of possible brand name change. Large version attached.

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    over 1 year ago

  2. Pro Mathieu Berenguer ▲▼▲ Mathieu Berenguer ▲▼▲

    Nice !!!!

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  3. Pro Herson Rodriguez Herson Rodriguez

    Looks great Ema

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  4. Pro Matt Kump? Matt Kump?

    I love the horizontal layout!

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  5. Joe Prince Joe Prince

    Nice Ema!

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  6. Pro Michael Spitz Michael Spitz

    Great type Ema. Digging the horizontal.

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  7. Pro Ema Hoffmann | Limeshot Ema Hoffmann | Limeshot

    @Joe, Herson, Mathieu Thanks guys!
    @Matt & Michael It does help with legibility, doesn't it :)

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  8. Garrett Bolin Garrett Bolin

    eventually I got it. At first I thought it said 'Card Jens' in a bottle. Really like it though! cute idea!

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  9. Pro Ema Hoffmann | Limeshot Ema Hoffmann | Limeshot

    Must shape the G a bit better then, eh :)

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  10. Pro Steve Lowtwait Steve Lowtwait

    I really like the progression of this project. You've nailed the style, you just need to keep tweaking details. Like others, I'm digging the horizontal format.

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  11. Pro Florin Capota Florin Capota

    great lookin also

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  12. Pro Mark Gilliland Mark Gilliland

    The horizontal definitely works better—not only with fitting the lettering in, but just in relating more to the product. Great work, Ema.

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  13. Pro Ema Hoffmann | Limeshot Ema Hoffmann | Limeshot

    Thanks Florin, Mark!

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  14. Pro Nick Slater Nick Slater

    WOW!!! So small but, epic!!

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  15. Pro Rich Baird Rich Baird

    very very nice.

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  16. Pro Luke Ritchie Luke Ritchie

    Really love this version Emma! :) was actually thinking horizontal would look awesome, and there it is! nice stuff

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  17. Pro Ema Hoffmann | Limeshot Ema Hoffmann | Limeshot

    Thanks Luke - actually lots of thanks, for all your help! If you were slightly closer than a continent away I'd give you a big smooch :)

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  18. Pro Luke Ritchie Luke Ritchie

    oolala ;) haha no prob Ema! glad to have been helpful

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  19. Rafał Krawczyk Rafał Krawczyk

    Good1.

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  20. Pro Inka Mathew Inka Mathew

    Beautiful, Ema. I like this version too. They're both great. Just my thought, maybe you don't need that curly separation line between "Garden" and "in a". It actually made me confused at first since my eyes read it as an "l". I think the gap and the bigger size "in" are enough. But this is just my opinion.
    Another thought, are the product themselves (these gardens in bottles), are they created in standing-up or laid-down bottles? I think this is one of those logos that actually giving suggestions of how the actual products look like. Including the orientation. But again, both are marvelous.

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  21. Pro Gert van Duinen Gert van Duinen

    Really dig this over the others Ema. Message in a Bottle!

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  22. Kirill Kirill

    sweet

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  23. Pro Ema Hoffmann | Limeshot Ema Hoffmann | Limeshot

    @Inka: I agree - I'll get rid of it when I vectorise; unfortunately my eraser didn't cope with it very well so I left it there in the sketch.

    Re position, these gardens are sometimes horizontal (like this sketch), but more often than not are actually vertical, with the plants coming out of the cut bottle bottom. I suppose it's doable as a logo, but the bottle would be really difficult to recognise as such in that position.

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  24. Pro Made By Thomas Made By Thomas

    I really like what you did here, altho I think it would be better to keep the word 'Gardens' as one.. Just a thought ;-)

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  25. Pro Ema Hoffmann | Limeshot Ema Hoffmann | Limeshot

    I did try keeping the "gardens" together at first, but single it just didnt work out. However, if the client goes with this name I'll definitely have another go at it with a more legible approach. It's a process :)

    over 1 year ago

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