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Concept revision for SchreberMeister in view of possible brand name change. Large version attached.
9 months ago
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Mathieu Brg ▲▼▲
Nice !!!!
9 months ago
Looks great Ema
9 months ago
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Matt Kump
I love the horizontal layout!
9 months ago
Nice Ema!
9 months ago
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Michael Spitz
Great type Ema. Digging the horizontal.
9 months ago
@Joe, Herson, Mathieu Thanks guys!
@Matt & Michael It does help with legibility, doesn't it :)
9 months ago
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Garrett Bolin
eventually I got it. At first I thought it said 'Card Jens' in a bottle. Really like it though! cute idea!
9 months ago
Must shape the G a bit better then, eh :)
9 months ago
I really like the progression of this project. You've nailed the style, you just need to keep tweaking details. Like others, I'm digging the horizontal format.
9 months ago
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Florin Capota
great lookin also
9 months ago
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Mark Gilliland
The horizontal definitely works better—not only with fitting the lettering in, but just in relating more to the product. Great work, Ema.
9 months ago
Thanks Florin, Mark!
9 months ago
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Nick Slater
WOW!!! So small but, epic!!
9 months ago
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Rich Baird
very very nice.
9 months ago
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Luke Ritchie
Really love this version Emma! :) was actually thinking horizontal would look awesome, and there it is! nice stuff
9 months ago
Thanks Luke - actually lots of thanks, for all your help! If you were slightly closer than a continent away I'd give you a big smooch :)
9 months ago
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Luke Ritchie
oolala ;) haha no prob Ema! glad to have been helpful
9 months ago
Good1.
9 months ago
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Inka Mathew
Beautiful, Ema. I like this version too. They're both great. Just my thought, maybe you don't need that curly separation line between "Garden" and "in a". It actually made me confused at first since my eyes read it as an "l". I think the gap and the bigger size "in" are enough. But this is just my opinion.
Another thought, are the product themselves (these gardens in bottles), are they created in standing-up or laid-down bottles? I think this is one of those logos that actually giving suggestions of how the actual products look like. Including the orientation. But again, both are marvelous.
9 months ago
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Gert van Duinen
Really dig this over the others Ema. Message in a Bottle!
9 months ago
sweet
9 months ago
@Inka: I agree - I'll get rid of it when I vectorise; unfortunately my eraser didn't cope with it very well so I left it there in the sketch.
Re position, these gardens are sometimes horizontal (like this sketch), but more often than not are actually vertical, with the plants coming out of the cut bottle bottom. I suppose it's doable as a logo, but the bottle would be really difficult to recognise as such in that position.
9 months ago
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Made By Thomas
I really like what you did here, altho I think it would be better to keep the word 'Gardens' as one.. Just a thought ;-)
9 months ago
I did try keeping the "gardens" together at first, but single it just didnt work out. However, if the client goes with this name I'll definitely have another go at it with a more legible approach. It's a process :)
9 months ago