Schreber Meister Logo - Vector #2

12 Responses

1. Pro Ema Hoffmann | Limeshot

   Incorporating Luke Ritchie's kind input. Tighter kerning (if one can say that in this context), more flexibility about the way the lettering fits in the bottle.

   UPDATE: Read more about it and see some close-ups here.

   over 1 year ago

2. Pro Gert van Duinen

   Wonderful!

   over 1 year ago

3. Pro Milosz Klimek

   Beauty, but I'm not sure which one is better this or the previous one... hmm...

   over 1 year ago

4. Pro Luke Ritchie

   Looking good :) You could probably cut out the inside part that overlaps the curl and the bottom line..?..

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   over 1 year ago

5. Pro Inka Mathew

   Beautiful logo, Ema. I love how organic it is. Looks like a luxury brand too.

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   over 1 year ago

6. Pro Ema Hoffmann | Limeshot

   @Luke: As in create some white space around the curl of the M where it cuts the bottle bottom?
   @Milosz: I tend to think this is better, especially when applied. The other one was getting weak at small sizes - lines were too thin, the space between letters too large.
   @Gert, Inka: Thanks guys! Just don't tell the client it looks like a luxury brand :)

   over 1 year ago

7. Pro Jared Granger

   Beautiful!

   over 1 year ago

8. Pro Luke Ritchie

   @Ema yip! either inside, or outside, or both. depending on what looks better

   over 1 year ago

9. Justin Duel James

   Es Niiiice... very clever, the type turned out great!

   over 1 year ago

10. Pro Florin Capota

    this looks very nice, it's a bit hard to read imo because of the S that sits on both lines of the word , (maybe this could be fixed and have the upper part of the S form the bottle neck..just saying )
    Great work anyway!

    over 1 year ago

11. Pro Steve Lowtwait

    It turned out great.

    over 1 year ago

12. Agata Kowalska

    beautiful.

    over 1 year ago