Looks good! I would make the envelope a little more transparent in order to give it the hologram look, if it's what you were looking for in the first place.
I like the concept and the direction you're going in, but the base specifically, looks strange. The border (between the metal and plastic) of the metal base doesn't make sense according to the perspective you are trying to portray. The shadow also doesn't help, as it doesn't 'ground' the base and goes too far around.
I like the direction of this and the unique palette, but feel with some corrections it could be even better :)
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Sexy!
over 1 year ago
Looks good! I would make the envelope a little more transparent in order to give it the hologram look, if it's what you were looking for in the first place.
over 1 year ago
I like the concept and the direction you're going in, but the base specifically, looks strange. The border (between the metal and plastic) of the metal base doesn't make sense according to the perspective you are trying to portray. The shadow also doesn't help, as it doesn't 'ground' the base and goes too far around.
I like the direction of this and the unique palette, but feel with some corrections it could be even better :)
over 1 year ago
I like it, but It feels like the prespective on the silver thing dosent fit with the envelope
over 1 year ago
Pro
jonathan olsen
This border seems a little bit to blurry due to glow:
http://d.pr/KHK4
over 1 year ago
Pro
Wil Nichols
Not bad. I'd lighten the entire thing, and increase contrast in the metal. A hologram should be bright, not this dark.
over 1 year ago