Had another crack at this one.
Trying out some custom type for the titling. Messed around with the banner a bit and tried to piece the elements together a bit more tidy and collected.
All sorts of feedback appreciated.
over 2 years ago
I think it's great Emir. Prefer this over the previous one bit time.
Very cool. I really dig this...
I really like this too - it's much more cohesive than the other version and the composition makes more sense. I love how you managed to put together kebab and the arabic lettering - works really well without looking cluttered or too busy. Nicely done!
Agreed. Just putting the kebab and script in the middle was a huge change in the feel of this piece. Great Emir!
love it bro!
Thanks guys, for all the comments.
I kinda regret making this "fancy-pansy" presentation, hehe. Because it sort of masks some faults of the logo, that I have to adjust. Mainly the banner and how it sort of gives the logo a tilt that makes it look a bit sloppy.
But judging by you guys and your kind words, at least I know that this concept is something I can stick to!
Dude! I almost didnt recognize your new avatar pic lol
Hehe, yeah. Had to switch to a winter avatar to celebrate that summer is finally officially over! ;)
Really enjoying this version!
Even If the way I found your work was kind of weird I have to love it...
@Mikael - Haha. It will be a great tale to tell our grandchildren when they aspire to become designers...
"Let me tell you about the day I first met Mikael Eidenberg. It was a cold rainy September afternoon and I had just finished my supper, when..."
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