The Orchid (rebound)

11 Responses

1. Pro Samantha Warren

   Thanks Dan! It was one of those decisions that sounded completely logical when I made it, but then when you pointed it out I realized I really needed to try it under the pedal. I think it looks a lot better under, thanks for the tip!!!

   almost 2 years ago

2. Pro Dan Mall

   Agreed!

   almost 2 years ago

3. Pro Ismael Burciaga

   Yeah this looks good. Now I hate to be super picky but it seems that the text "play" is not centered vertically to the text on the right. Overall, good job.

   I WANT TO SEE MORE!!! :-)

   almost 2 years ago

4. Kevin Garcia

   @Ismael, I think the full word is "Orchid", so "the" will definitely not be centered, it's kind of off to the left. What I think does need to happen, is the vertical element in the "T" in "The" needs to align with the vertical stroke on the "R", which will anchor those two together a bit better

   almost 2 years ago

5. Pro Brent Jackson

   Fuck yeah!

   almost 2 years ago

6. Pro Samantha Warren

   Great points folks, thanks for the feedback! I will probably make those revisions in the next round. You guys rock.

   almost 2 years ago

7. Pro Ismael Burciaga

   @Kevin - Oh I wasn't talking about the bottom part. That is obvious that its a title. I was referring to the top bar "Play: Fading memory" ...... "Play:" and the "Fading...." aren't vertically centered. Looks like Play can be shifted 1 or 2 pixels down.

   almost 2 years ago

8. Kevin Garcia

   @Ismael - I can read, really, i can *headdesk

   almost 2 years ago

9. Pro Gedy Rivera

   Sweet colors and very nice typography.

   almost 2 years ago

10. Tiffany Wardle de Sousa

    Maybe "The" needs to scoot a bit more away so the left part of the arm shows a bit more?

    almost 2 years ago

11. Pro Skylar Hartman

    Great use of color and texture

    almost 2 years ago