Downtown Comb

12 Responses

1. Sean Ball

   Concept logo for Downtown Barbershop, in downtown Stillwater, OK. Playing with a skyline in the comb bristles.

   almost 2 years ago

2. Tom Nußbaum

   the skyline in the comb is very clever. really like your style.

   almost 2 years ago

3. Sean Ball

   Thank you very much Tom!

   almost 2 years ago

4. Trevor Baum

   Really clever, but maybe looks a bit too design-y for a barbershop. Unless they want that.

   almost 2 years ago

5. Rich Baird

   Unfortunately while it is well executed when scaled down it maybe perceived as a broken disused comb. The type seems solid enough, do you need a mark as well?

   almost 2 years ago

6. Sean Ball

   @RichardBraird Good point! I'm pretty sure there would be scaling issues with this concept.

   almost 2 years ago

7. Jose▵

   Helvetica Neue? Oh god, I love it!

   almost 2 years ago

8. Sean Ball

   @Jose Good eye man! It is indeed Helvetica Neue. Thanks!

   almost 2 years ago

9. Tom Nußbaum

   allow me to say one thing, it might be better to give the comb some kind of rounded corners, so it may be easier to see this as a comb, not only lines

   almost 2 years ago

10. Sean Ball

    @Tom I was also thinking the same thing.

    almost 2 years ago

11. Jonathan Patterson

    I agree with @Tom. Also, to echo @Richard's message, maybe you need to remove some of the prongs.. that might simplify it a bit. Tagline is too small to read when scaled as well.

    I love the overall idea, just needs some finessing.

    almost 2 years ago

12. Sean Ball

    @Jonathan Thanks! Yes, I also agree with many of the comments. This is only a first round logo, so there is definitely room for improvement. Thank you all for the great feedback!

    almost 2 years ago