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Tonkalula logo idea

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  1. Pro 4999915986_6bcf0272d4_b Cole Henley

    Nice. Very feminine (hope that was the desired effect) and sophisticated. Some thoughts:

    The kerning between the 'T' and 'o' needs tightening and the baseline on 'Breeder' is a bit out.

    With the strong shadow on the white outline (vertical light from above) I'd be inclined to bump up the shadow on the stitch effect and also beneath the badge itself (against the background).

    Looking really nice!

    9 months ago

  2. Pro Me Anthony Killeen

    I like that Richard. The letters on Breeder seem to be up & down a bit but nice work!

    9 months ago

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    9 months ago

  4. Pro Port-cropped Richard Wiggins

    Cole: Thanks for the feedback, really useful. I was aiming for a feminine look, but it may be a bit too feminine. Cat breeding seems to be more of a female area, but don't want to put off the guys! ;)

    Completely right about the kerning on the 'T' and baseline on 'Breeder', which was also not quite centred. Also adjusted the shadows.

    Uploaded a rebound with the changes if you get a chance to look.

    Anthony: Cheers. As above, should be fixed now.

    9 months ago

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