Good layout. The only thing that bothers me is the "top^" vert. line at the bottom. I wish you didn't have the stick, or white vertical line thing there. Just have the "top" with the nice enclosure you have on it already floating would be cleaner. Or even since you have the ribbon style on it..make it fold over from the right, over the page or something. Everything else is nice work.
Palette is great. I'm a little concerned about legibility in the main titles, though, since the green bar does not extend below the baseline of the type to show descenders as well.
Great to see the full layout! I really like it, the limited colour palette works beautifully. I can't make up my mind about the type in the green titles - I do like how they look visually, but I agree with Dan about legibility. Also, if they were vertically centered in the bar instead, it would match the 'Matt Woldren Portfolio' text in the ribbon under the title.
Really nice work again!
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Aurélien Foutoyet
A WP theme designed for Peaxl
9 months ago
I really like it Aurélien
9 months ago
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Aurélien Foutoyet
Thanks Herson I appreciate
9 months ago
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Julien Renvoye
So so so so so nice ! lol
9 months ago
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Justin Burns
Good layout. The only thing that bothers me is the "top^" vert. line at the bottom. I wish you didn't have the stick, or white vertical line thing there. Just have the "top" with the nice enclosure you have on it already floating would be cleaner. Or even since you have the ribbon style on it..make it fold over from the right, over the page or something. Everything else is nice work.
9 months ago
Palette is great. I'm a little concerned about legibility in the main titles, though, since the green bar does not extend below the baseline of the type to show descenders as well.
9 months ago
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Claire Coullon
Great to see the full layout! I really like it, the limited colour palette works beautifully. I can't make up my mind about the type in the green titles - I do like how they look visually, but I agree with Dan about legibility. Also, if they were vertically centered in the bar instead, it would match the 'Matt Woldren Portfolio' text in the ribbon under the title.
Really nice work again!
9 months ago