Boots

7 Responses

1. Pro James Young

   Nice work Tom.

   Is the Burton orange title the product name or the range? Guessing Burton is range and SL9 is the boot. If so, I'd maybe swap size and position of two although SL9 isn't the most appealing product name :p

   9 months ago

2. Tom Kenny

   Thanks, James. I know what you mean but the key thing here is the brand name. I've been told people are very brand-aware in the extreme/action sports are so that takes priority in this case. Maybe the SL-9 does need more attention drawn to it as it is the product name after all even if it isn't very attractive like you say.

   When will companies learn to use meaningful names and not just a series of letters and numbers?!

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   9 months ago

3. Pro Ted Goas

   This looks great Tom. Everything works quite well together and the type makes it quite easy to read. Only thing I might, might suggest is adding a bit more vertical space between vertical sections.

   Like Navigation | vertical space | breadcrumbs | vertical space | Burton, SL9 | vertical space | sub nav, etc...

   9 months ago

4. Tom Kenny

   Thanks, Ted. The only problem there is that it will throw off some of the design not seen in the shot and I don't think it's necessary because everything is defined clearly with different styles. I think it would only be an issue if it was all just the same styled text :)

   9 months ago

5. Pro James Young

   @Tom, totally understand and know what you mean. Had similar in the past too. Looking good either way :)

   9 months ago

6. Pro Mattia Forza

   All's very cool Tom! The only thing that really hurts my eyes are that boots. My Burton's are prettier! :P

   9 months ago

7. Tom Kenny

   Thanks Mattia! I did think of picking some nicer looking boots but to be honest most of them aren't particularly good looking so I just picked an average pair that was a different colour to black and white ;)

   9 months ago