Simplify.

10 Responses

1. Greg Gazdowicz

   This is pretty rad, but I think the first stroke of the M should be thin like the third stroke. It would help take the bulkiness out of that letter.

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   9 months ago

2. Pro Sean McCabe

   You're right Greg, that would've been a better choice I agree.

   9 months ago

3. Pro Jake Thompson

   Love it!

   PS. What pen are you using? :)

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   9 months ago

4. Pro Eric Hoffman

   You're getting good, dude! Seriously good stuff!

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   9 months ago

5. Pro Sean McCabe

   @Jake Used the 005 and 01 for this one.

   @Eric Hey thanks a bunch!

   9 months ago

6. Pro Claire Coullon

   Awesome. Every time I come back to your page, your work gets better and better with every shot. Your typography has got a really original, vibrant style + feel and it comes across in all the drawings and designs you do. Nice work again!

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   9 months ago

7. Pro Rob V

   Great work, agree with Greg as well, the "M" needs some work.

   9 months ago

8. Juan Gomez

   may i suggest just fixing the kerning beetween "IM" "LI" "FY" :) great work just that seems not flowing for me.

   9 months ago

9. Pro Sean McCabe

   @Juan, yep, if this were more than a quick sketch done in pen, I would definitely make a lot of adjustments. :)

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   9 months ago

10. Pro Gert van Duinen

    Despite some odd kerning, it's very nice Sean~!

    9 months ago