I like this very much ... although it seems there should be a break between the E's ... I get an uneasy feeling from the weight created by the combined letters.
Thanks everyone for the compliments and constructive criticism, that's what makes dribbble a valuable place to be. I'll work up some ideas to make the EE more legible without loosing the creek concept.
I think this is a very good concept. It is clear for me that the lines are as long as 2 'e' would be. I'd never cut them into two. For me, this is perfect. Nice work!
I don't think cutting them would solve it. I think possibly adding a small bar somewhere might though. Not too sure. Looks good though. Just having a problem with that E being an EE
I'm with viktor.. you don't need to seperate them as you can go by the general width of letters and see that's worth 2 of them.. I read it as creek before I saw the title of the page.
What about small mid-bars in E's? That would keep both up and down bars connected and make a suggestion that there's two E's? Just thinking out loud. Nice anyway.
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Mackey Saturday
Second part of a word mark for a company I can't yet disclose the identity of.
9 months ago
Amazing!
9 months ago
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Riad Kanane
I like the skewed snap!!! ;)
9 months ago
I like this very much ... although it seems there should be a break between the E's ... I get an uneasy feeling from the weight created by the combined letters.
9 months ago
Whoa! Nice dude!
9 months ago
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Don Ramón
Clever man!
9 months ago
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Mike Jones
Rad bro!
9 months ago
I like the idea man, but I'm reading 'CREK' only...
9 months ago
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Alexander Wende
I like this very much but unfortunatly have to agree with joe^
9 months ago
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Mackey Saturday
Thanks everyone for the compliments and constructive criticism, that's what makes dribbble a valuable place to be. I'll work up some ideas to make the EE more legible without loosing the creek concept.
9 months ago
^Can you simply put a cut in the 3 lines to bring out the 2 'Es'?
EDIT: like this http://cl.ly/9Mqy
9 months ago
I think this is a very good concept. It is clear for me that the lines are as long as 2 'e' would be. I'd never cut them into two. For me, this is perfect. Nice work!
9 months ago
I don't think cutting them would solve it. I think possibly adding a small bar somewhere might though. Not too sure. Looks good though. Just having a problem with that E being an EE
9 months ago
@ joe you just loose the moxy when you cut it...
9 months ago
Looks great. Reads as CREEK to me.
9 months ago
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Kris Todd
I'm with viktor.. you don't need to seperate them as you can go by the general width of letters and see that's worth 2 of them.. I read it as creek before I saw the title of the page.
9 months ago
Was just a suggestion Joshua, guess it doesn't work though :)
9 months ago
nice
9 months ago
@Joe, of course. just as my notes are just an opinion ;)
9 months ago
I read CREEK. Agree w/ Viktor.
9 months ago
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Milosz Klimek
What about small mid-bars in E's? That would keep both up and down bars connected and make a suggestion that there's two E's? Just thinking out loud. Nice anyway.
9 months ago
this is genius dude!
9 months ago
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Andrew Hoffman
nice man
9 months ago
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Luke Lisi
Somethin' in the Cherry Creek area... maybe? I don't know... looks awesome though!
Oh and, SW☰☰T!
9 months ago
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Matt Kaufenberg
I think the long EE's works great! A really nice concept.
My suggestion would be: what if they were a bit wavy as to emulate moving water? Maybe that's been done to death though...
9 months ago