Thirst

6 Responses

1. Pro Owen Jones

   Logo for a group for young adults at Mutley Baptist Church

   almost 2 years ago

2. josephine

   love the 's'

   almost 2 years ago

3. Pro Owen Jones

   Thanks Josephine!

   over 1 year ago

4. Claire Coullon

   Love the concept, it's amazing how readable that 's' remains. I wonder if there might be a way to remove/smoothen the pointy bits that resulted from modifying the 's' - specifically, on the middle left and right of the drop (if that makes any sense). At the minute, those points are quite sharp especially compared to the shapes in the letterforms. Lovely blue too by the way!

   over 1 year ago

5. Pro Owen Jones

   Thanks Claire. I actually reduced these 'spikes' considerably for that very reason but I think any further tweaking would have a detrimental effect on the 's' legibility I'm afraid. Do you think the top of the droplet helps? I think it's quite a similar point.

   over 1 year ago

6. Claire Coullon

   Good point, I so easily saw an 's' that I didn't think of that. I think the one at the top is perfect, it immediately suggests a droplet and doesn't affect the legibility.

   over 1 year ago