Does this work? Honesty please :)
10 months ago
I think I only read it because I know what it says. When the page first loaded I didn't instantly see it.
Almost, I don't think it's quite 'A' enough, I recognised instantly but I know what it's for so probably not the best test.
I love the mark, but it just doesn't quite make it IMO.
I'd love to see the A in the same font as the rest and the mark above/to the left of the logotype in a ring/circle.
Really behind the site and the cause man, great initiative.
Agreed with the other comments, can read it because I already know what it's meant to be.
Needs to be more A like to pull it off.
I would like to see it with the tip down. :/
Big thanks for feedback guys. All noted.
@Giovanni - I want the pen to be held up above the head rather than appear to be writing :)
Mark, I think it's inspired (get it?). that being said; I knew what it said because I'm familiar with the project - I wonder if it is clear enough to someone with no exposure. I'm a fan of the "revolution" feeling - almost propoganda-esque.
@Max - "Mark, I think it's inspired (get it?)" I should get it, I chose the name for that reason :P
Thanks dude.
Yes it works. I like it. Congrats.
7 months ago
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Mark Collins
Does this work? Honesty please :)
10 months ago
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Matt Kump
I think I only read it because I know what it says. When the page first loaded I didn't instantly see it.
10 months ago
Almost, I don't think it's quite 'A' enough, I recognised instantly but I know what it's for so probably not the best test.
I love the mark, but it just doesn't quite make it IMO.
I'd love to see the A in the same font as the rest and the mark above/to the left of the logotype in a ring/circle.
Really behind the site and the cause man, great initiative.
10 months ago
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Richard Meredith
Agreed with the other comments, can read it because I already know what it's meant to be.
Needs to be more A like to pull it off.
10 months ago
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Giovanni Lauricella✎
I would like to see it with the tip down. :/
10 months ago
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Mark Collins
Big thanks for feedback guys. All noted.
@Giovanni - I want the pen to be held up above the head rather than appear to be writing :)
10 months ago
Mark, I think it's inspired (get it?). that being said; I knew what it said because I'm familiar with the project - I wonder if it is clear enough to someone with no exposure. I'm a fan of the "revolution" feeling - almost propoganda-esque.
10 months ago
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Mark Collins
@Max - "Mark, I think it's inspired (get it?)" I should get it, I chose the name for that reason :P
Thanks dude.
10 months ago
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Marian Pop
Yes it works. I like it. Congrats.
7 months ago