Working on an icon for a project I'm thinking about, some kind of a mobile design gallery.
You can download the full size here.
Now the famous question : "what do you guys think ?"
Thanks for your critics ;)
I like it :) maybe change the size of the iphone i mean the black area, is not proportional with the size of the pocket, i think ...so that the display highlight more ...
Actually it was like you said before, but there is a lot of different colors on the iPhone screen, so I thought it was not "homogenous" enough, but I'll keep it in mind ! Thanks for the idea ;)
C'est vraiment du bon boulot. S'il fallait chercher la petite bête je dirais que l'icône est plus sombre que la moyenne des icônes iPhone, ça risque de faire un peu bizarre mais bon, ça se défend. Seule vraie remarque : la transition entre l'iPhone et le tissu de la poche me paraît manquer de contraste, c'est difficile à lire de loin.
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Working on an icon for a project I'm thinking about, some kind of a mobile design gallery.
You can download the full size here.
Now the famous question : "what do you guys think ?"
Thanks for your critics ;)
almost 2 years ago
I like it :) maybe change the size of the iphone i mean the black area, is not proportional with the size of the pocket, i think ...so that the display highlight more ...
almost 2 years ago
Actually it was like you said before, but there is a lot of different colors on the iPhone screen, so I thought it was not "homogenous" enough, but I'll keep it in mind ! Thanks for the idea ;)
almost 2 years ago
C'est vraiment du bon boulot. S'il fallait chercher la petite bête je dirais que l'icône est plus sombre que la moyenne des icônes iPhone, ça risque de faire un peu bizarre mais bon, ça se défend. Seule vraie remarque : la transition entre l'iPhone et le tissu de la poche me paraît manquer de contraste, c'est difficile à lire de loin.
over 1 year ago
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Mike Cummings
Really nice @Nico! Might be cool to put a little tag in there somewhere like Levi's does with their jeans. Could be a nice little extra touch :D
about 1 year ago
@Mike you're right, I'll try that :)
about 1 year ago
Rebound
Pocket Design 2
by Nico Prat
Followed Dribbblers advices and did some adjustments. Iphone screen is now more visible and a little red label has been added. See attachment !
about 1 year ago