Continuing the tweaks I have now added a 3rd 'plank' as well as adding creating the usual spacing of end-to-end planks with the hope this helps with overall perception.
Also tweaked the overall perspective and made some subtle changes to element sizes. Still not sure on colours yet; either this muted blue/grey or the more vibrant orange as seen in earlier shots.
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Graham Smith
Tweaked a number of elements based on some earlier feedback.
Two new fonts with reduced tracking all round.
Slightly wider and shallower decking/surface structure whilst making the urn/pot smaller as well.
Also reduced overall perspective of the mark just a fraction.
I feel this helps define the urn a little better than before without having to resort to adding further elements,
almost 2 years ago
Really like the work on the deck & the perspective, it really adds stability & space.
Good work :)
almost 2 years ago
So clean, great work.
almost 2 years ago
That mark feels wonderful!
almost 2 years ago
translates much better now, my eye seems to read it more easily.. nice tweak
almost 2 years ago
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The Small Garden Logo V3
by Graham Smith
Continuing the tweaks I have now added a 3rd 'plank' as well as adding creating the usual spacing of end-to-end planks with the hope this helps with overall perception.
Also tweaked the overall perspective and made some subtle changes to element sizes. Still not sure on colours yet; either this muted blue/grey or the more vibrant orange as seen in earlier shots.
almost 2 years ago
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Gert van Duinen
Like this version most.
almost 2 years ago
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Aldrich Tan
i like this one the most, fo reel... wish they didnt go with the leaves =/
almost 2 years ago