my first submission!
an earthy, textured design for an angling website
screenshot is the form text area and button at the bottom right of the homepage
the orange of the button is based on the color of bright floats
really nice texture you got here. I don't mind the button color and I think the text is readable enough, but maybe you could try design the button to fit better in this textured area.
Maybe a little noise? I'm not sure. I just see a polished, solid element on a textured grunge area and doesn't fit that well.
hey josh & thanos,
thanks for taking time to comment
i'm going to play with it on photoshop
new to dribbble, but impressed with the constructive feedback. it all helps :)
ben
8 Responses
my first submission!
an earthy, textured design for an angling website
screenshot is the form text area and button at the bottom right of the homepage
the orange of the button is based on the color of bright floats
10 months ago
I really like it! I'd probably reconsider the color of the button.
10 months ago
hmm yeah, it is bright, thanks for the comment
10 months ago
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Eric Miller
Ben, I don't mind the button color, I just think the text on it is a bit hard to read. Nice first shot!
10 months ago
thanks eric, good advice
10 months ago
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Josh Miller
Really nice texture.
10 months ago
Hi Ben,
really nice texture you got here. I don't mind the button color and I think the text is readable enough, but maybe you could try design the button to fit better in this textured area.
Maybe a little noise? I'm not sure. I just see a polished, solid element on a textured grunge area and doesn't fit that well.
Other than that, it looks great man. Welcome :)
10 months ago
hey josh & thanos,
thanks for taking time to comment
i'm going to play with it on photoshop
new to dribbble, but impressed with the constructive feedback. it all helps :)
ben
10 months ago