I like it, especially the attribution area. One thing though. The line height (which you're of course matching to the line pattern) is a little big, IMO. But maybe in the grand scheme of things it's fine?
@Rogie yeah, that's kinda what I meant. I'm just curious to see how it'd look, at the moment it looks kinda "muddy"(?) to me? if that's even the right word to use. Maybe because I'm not looking at the whole thing.
I think it looks awesome! I think Prekesh has a point with regards to the drop shadows and gradients, seems a bit strange on note paper. But I think it works really well, I wouldn't change it. The Ned Bar looks beneath the paper to me but I might make the shadow a tad darker just avoid confusion. Great work :)
Like it, but looks a lot like a shot that Jonno Riekwel did earlier this week.
And the text ON the lines (as baseline) doesn't that make more sense? As like we were taught in school. When we used a pen to write stuff down ;-)
Maybe more contrast between the text and the lines then, for legibility/readability then
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Jake Dugard
Love me some Three Amigos. And I love this shot. Very crisp.
almost 2 years ago
Nice and clean!
almost 2 years ago
I like it, especially the attribution area. One thing though. The line height (which you're of course matching to the line pattern) is a little big, IMO. But maybe in the grand scheme of things it's fine?
almost 2 years ago
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Julius Koroll
Ay, delizioso! Is the background of Ned Nederlander above or behind the paper?
almost 2 years ago
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Prekesh Chavda
Is this for your upcoming tumblr redesign? :) looks cool. Curious to know how everything would look flat, without drop-shadows etc
almost 2 years ago
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Rogie
@Prekesh ive tried it a few times, id need to alter the site background to pull it off...are you thinking also to remove the texture/gradients?
almost 2 years ago
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Rogie
@Dan I think you've got a point. I'll mess with the line height a tad.
@Julius how does it appear?
almost 2 years ago
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Prekesh Chavda
@Rogie yeah, that's kinda what I meant. I'm just curious to see how it'd look, at the moment it looks kinda "muddy"(?) to me? if that's even the right word to use. Maybe because I'm not looking at the whole thing.
almost 2 years ago
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Rogie
@prekky i always thought muddy meant a bit blurry, the definition is that it is unclear or blurred.
almost 2 years ago
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Julius Koroll
@Rogie I dunno. The cut between background and the paper is not "deep" enough for my eyes :)
almost 2 years ago
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Rogie
@Julius good feedback bro!
almost 2 years ago
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Brendan Falkowski
Yes on the crosshatch and thin red lines.
almost 2 years ago
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Iain MacDonald
I like this! Maybe place the type closer to the baseline? I think it would make more sense that way. :-)
Loving it though. ;D
almost 2 years ago
I love the font but would it look better tighter - smaller gap between the lines? Other than that its stunning :)
almost 2 years ago
Dat Ned Nederlander deed het 'm.
Ik heb hem geliked ;)
almost 2 years ago
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Jonathan Ogden
I think it looks awesome! I think Prekesh has a point with regards to the drop shadows and gradients, seems a bit strange on note paper. But I think it works really well, I wouldn't change it. The Ned Bar looks beneath the paper to me but I might make the shadow a tad darker just avoid confusion. Great work :)
almost 2 years ago
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Andrew Colclough
Chuf chuf chuf chuf....NEDDDIE!!!!!!!!!!
almost 2 years ago
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Julius Koroll
@Rogie sarcastic?
almost 2 years ago
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Julius Koroll
I think a clearer (less blurry or more opacity) Shadow might help. :-)
almost 2 years ago
Like it, but looks a lot like a shot that Jonno Riekwel did earlier this week.
And the text ON the lines (as baseline) doesn't that make more sense? As like we were taught in school. When we used a pen to write stuff down ;-)
Maybe more contrast between the text and the lines then, for legibility/readability then
just my 2c's
Luv your work, Rogie
almost 2 years ago
Ned Nederlander? xD
almost 2 years ago
Was tasked a few weeks to do the same. http://dribbble.com/shots/214596-Pull-Quote-2
I like yours better. Nice shot.
almost 2 years ago
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Matthew Smith
Oh Ned, your the star of the Silver Screen!
almost 2 years ago
"It is like beer" is my favorite Three Amigos reference. Well done!
almost 2 years ago