The glow is a bit too strong so it looks choppy on the edges, like this. http://d.pr/sHWm Also, It would look cooler if the paper came out of the icon.
Nice! I agree about the wideness of the drawers. I think compositionally, the edge of the paper should not line up directly with the to of the box... I'd move it down about halfway to the opening, or up about the same interval.
Here is the final product, however after keeping it under wraps for so long, I was informed that this icon would not be used...
Ah well, it was fun to make and great practice :)
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Jack Thomas
I cant say much about this but I am allowed to post this to get feedback on the icon. What do you think?
almost 2 years ago
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Joe Kennedy
Looks really nice I love the wood texture! but does the white shadow at the bottom make sense?
almost 2 years ago
If the paper is supposed to be directly up from the hole, I think you should add some shadow on and behind the paper in the top :)
almost 2 years ago
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Joe Kennedy
Also maybe give the paper some texture like this: http://j0egas.com/images/large/receipt.png
almost 2 years ago
The glow is a bit too strong so it looks choppy on the edges, like this. http://d.pr/sHWm
Also, It would look cooler if the paper came out of the icon.
almost 2 years ago
Pops. But the paper at the top is making it look flat, give it a wave.
almost 2 years ago
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Joao Pires
Really nice work with the shadows/highlights!
almost 2 years ago
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Fares Farhan
Really nice. I think the drawers are bit too wide. It should end right before the round corner starts. Well, a picture worth thousand words :)
almost 2 years ago
Make the paper say Obama.
almost 2 years ago
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Dain Kennison
Nice! I agree about the wideness of the drawers. I think compositionally, the edge of the paper should not line up directly with the to of the box... I'd move it down about halfway to the opening, or up about the same interval.
almost 2 years ago
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Nigel Evans
Looks nice, but the edges are far to sharp imo :(
almost 2 years ago
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by Jack Thomas
Here is the final product, however after keeping it under wraps for so long, I was informed that this icon would not be used...
Ah well, it was fun to make and great practice :)
over 1 year ago
Clear and details.keep nice job.
over 1 year ago