@Dan no, I need more exclamations!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;)
It's great but I think you should use fewer letters. There are too many letters. And some of the letters are cut in half which makes them difficult to read. That grass is really green. Maybe it should be less green or more green. And I don't know if you noticed but the tree is blurry. Maybe move it down a pixel. Or up a pixel. And maybe add two more. And that kid’s foot is cut off. Was that intentional. And why doesn’t he have abs. Those shorts are kind of long, maybe you could shorten them. Show some knee you know, it’s summer FFS. But not too short.
Dude these are all lovely! And Cory Godbey's illustrations in this project (and that stunning one on Zaarly's landing page!) are beautifully engaging! A refreshing change from the usual minimal/flat/vector stuff we see on most sites. Great design choice!
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Matthew Smith
Success message for posting an offer.
almost 2 years ago
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Ian Dale
Love the illustration! Is that Cory Godbey?
almost 2 years ago
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Jacob Klos
That kid is fantastic. Excellent work!
almost 2 years ago
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Joey Lomanto
Love everything you've done for Zaarly. You are awesome.
almost 2 years ago
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Eric Hoffman
The kid is awesome! Brings warmth and personality to the page.
almost 2 years ago
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Jared MacPherson
I can't wait for this to be in my city. :)
almost 2 years ago
Pimpin.
almost 2 years ago
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matt rossi
excellent illustration
almost 2 years ago
Beautiful, playful-without-being-childish work. Nitpick: I'd leave just one exclamation mark. One should be enough for emphasis, no? :-)
almost 2 years ago
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Andrew Pautler
Hilarious. This alone makes me want to post something on Zaarly.
almost 2 years ago
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Samuel Couto
This is shouting "Success"! Awesome work! :D
almost 2 years ago
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Charles Riccardi
You guys have some pretty awesome illustrators.
almost 2 years ago
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Marco Suarez
Great job! This is going to be so sweet.
almost 2 years ago
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Matthew Smith
Yep, this is Cory Godbey.
@Dan no, I need more exclamations!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;)
You're probably right.
almost 2 years ago
Ah! That hurt, man. Have a heart! :-)
almost 2 years ago
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Matthew Anderson
So, so good.
almost 2 years ago
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Mike Meyer
It's great but I think you should use fewer letters. There are too many letters. And some of the letters are cut in half which makes them difficult to read. That grass is really green. Maybe it should be less green or more green. And I don't know if you noticed but the tree is blurry. Maybe move it down a pixel. Or up a pixel. And maybe add two more. And that kid’s foot is cut off. Was that intentional. And why doesn’t he have abs. Those shorts are kind of long, maybe you could shorten them. Show some knee you know, it’s summer FFS. But not too short.
almost 2 years ago
I see what you did there, Mike. :-)
That said, I personally value 1 comment giving (constructive) feedback more than 10 "nice shot"-type comments. ("Likes" are for the latter, right?)
almost 2 years ago
what typeface is that in the dummy copy?
great work.
almost 2 years ago
This style will never get old in my book. Brilliant and inspiring.
almost 2 years ago
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Shaun Moynihan
Love it... I'd say use one or three!!!
almost 2 years ago
So much personality! Awesomeness!!
almost 2 years ago
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Luc Latulippe
Dude these are all lovely! And Cory Godbey's illustrations in this project (and that stunning one on Zaarly's landing page!) are beautifully engaging! A refreshing change from the usual minimal/flat/vector stuff we see on most sites. Great design choice!
over 1 year ago
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Matthew Smith
Thanks Luc!
over 1 year ago