Updated ideas based on feedback from varick, russel and crystal. I played around with simplifying the letterforms, adjusting the prism and tried another prism shape for comparison.
Now I'm stuck on which direction to go with, I like the simplicity of the top two but think the bottom two have more character.
The bottom is MUCH better. When you originally posted the first shot I thought it was a 2D shape. The bottom is more complex but has great dimension to it.
(Optionally, you could try the triangle prism in the upright position like the bottom row. That could solve the problem of complexity.)
I like the simplicity of the top two... but since you mentioned that the prism shapes may change on different products, I don't know how much my opinion matters.
Judson has a good point about the bottom having better dimension tho. If you can colorize the triangle prism like the bottom, you might have the best of both worlds.
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Dennis Eusebio
Updated ideas based on feedback from varick, russel and crystal. I played around with simplifying the letterforms, adjusting the prism and tried another prism shape for comparison.
Now I'm stuck on which direction to go with, I like the simplicity of the top two but think the bottom two have more character.
10 months ago
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Chris Salvador
favoring the bottom one for some reason, as see it to play in contrast/balance with the type.
10 months ago
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Judson Collier
The bottom is MUCH better. When you originally posted the first shot I thought it was a 2D shape. The bottom is more complex but has great dimension to it.
(Optionally, you could try the triangle prism in the upright position like the bottom row. That could solve the problem of complexity.)
10 months ago
I like the simplicity of the top two... but since you mentioned that the prism shapes may change on different products, I don't know how much my opinion matters.
Judson has a good point about the bottom having better dimension tho. If you can colorize the triangle prism like the bottom, you might have the best of both worlds.
10 months ago