I am working on yet another personal logo, and would love advice and thoughts on this. Do you think it is a step in the right direction? Or, do I go directly to jail, do not pass go, do not collect $200?
almost 2 years ago
I think it looks great. My only grip is it creates an optical illusion that its crooked.
Thanks Eric, and yeah, I see that. I am going to work at it to see what I can do. Thanks!
Nice colours and cool font but perhaps a bit too busy. Could be the gradient halftone dots or maybe just the paper background you're showing it on.
I made changes to the logo (see attached file) - I got rid of the blue surrounding it, and also provided a flat version of the logo.
Nice! I like the revised version at the bottom the best — perhaps it would seem less busy if the halftone dots were bigger? Just a thought.
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Kassie Wright
I am working on yet another personal logo, and would love advice and thoughts on this. Do you think it is a step in the right direction? Or, do I go directly to jail, do not pass go, do not collect $200?
almost 2 years ago
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Eric Hoffman
I think it looks great. My only grip is it creates an optical illusion that its crooked.
almost 2 years ago
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Kassie Wright
Thanks Eric, and yeah, I see that. I am going to work at it to see what I can do. Thanks!
almost 2 years ago
Nice colours and cool font but perhaps a bit too busy. Could be the gradient halftone dots or maybe just the paper background you're showing it on.
almost 2 years ago
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Kassie Wright
I made changes to the logo (see attached file) - I got rid of the blue surrounding it, and also provided a flat version of the logo.
almost 2 years ago
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Brekk Bockrath
Nice! I like the revised version at the bottom the best — perhaps it would seem less busy if the halftone dots were bigger? Just a thought.
almost 2 years ago