Running Bear 2

21 Responses

1. Pro Floris Voorveld

   "With a little help from my friends", like the Beatles would say :) Thanks guys (and Inka :P).

   Going to let this one rest for now, new day tommorow.

   edit: suggestions are still welcome of course, please bare in mind (no pun intended) I'm still in an early phase :)

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2. Justin Baker

   Nice improvement!

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3. Pro Inka Mathew

   ^ Agree. Sleep on it, Floris ;-)

   11 months ago

4. Bruno O. Barros

   Nice one.

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5. Pro Rick Landon

   I like this version a lot. Nice job Floris.

   11 months ago

6. Juan Gomez

   now he's running, the other one was more like making karate.

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7. Pro Chip Truex

   Oh hecks yeah! It definitely looks like he's running... but he could also be bowling, and frankly, that would be just swell.

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8. Pro Alen Type08 Pavlovic

   Great work Floris! Feel free to lose the toe, it's a too tiny detail IMO.

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9. Pro Dean Hudson

   This is awesome Floris, beautiful mark

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10. Pro Jonathan Patterson

    Looks great. One thought is to make his left foot look like it's angled up a tiny bit. That might push it to look like he's running even more. Or, maybe you can put a thin oval under him so it looks like he's bounding up and down.

    11 months ago

11. Gabriel Levcovitz

    Beautiful!
    What about decreasing the negative space between the back members and the body? Maybe it would improve the mark readability... ;-)

    11 months ago

12. Keenan Wells

    Yeah, agree with everyone... this looks really nice. Would it look more uniform / unified if your remove that sharp angle on the left knee and round it like the rest of the "joints" on the figure. It seems like the only element that sticks out in a strange way since all the other "joints" are rounded, but then again, it's hard to say. Really great job though!

    11 months ago

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    Running Bear 2 (adjust... Maybe when you lift the front foot a little bit. So it looks like it's running without touching the ground. Otherwise I got the feeling the bear is skateboar... July 15, 2011

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    Running Bear 2 (adjustment)

    by Elbert Niezen

    Maybe when you lift the front foot a little bit. So it looks like it's running without touching the ground. Otherwise I got the feeling the bear is skateboarding. Great work though! :) Also nice portfolio!

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14. José

    Great work!

    11 months ago

15. Pro Floris Voorveld

    wow, thank you all so much for all the reactions!

    @Alen: Yeah I know, but it completes the line from the bottom from his dark paw to the back of his knee. Might reconsider it though.

    @Elbert&Juan: Thanks for the graphical hints! Will definitely consider those :)

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16. Pro Sean O'Grady

    Best one

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17. Pro Milosz Klimek

    Nice running bear.

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18. Pro Maarten Hoogvliet

    at first glance i thought the bear was ice skating. Probably because its left leg is still fixed on the ground with a really pointy toe..

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19. Pro Floris Voorveld

    Thanks all! Attached a slightly adjusted version, with guidelines.

    11 months ago

20. Pro Inka Mathew

    Looking good, Floris!! The hind arm still seems to look a bit separated from the rest of the bear, but maybe that's just me ;-)

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    Bear End Day 2 I agree with Jeffrey and Anthony about the front leg. But it makes the bear a little too comical imo, for the client. It's all about Russia and transport, se... July 15, 2011

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    Bear End Day 2

    by Floris Voorveld

    I agree with Jeffrey and Anthony about the front leg. But it makes the bear a little too comical imo, for the client. It's all about Russia and transport, serious business.

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