I think it's adorable! Maybe up the contrast between the lines and the dark part of the penguin because it's hard to see the eye?
It has such a nice shape :)
Love him! Can he be more massive? Seems to have far too much space in there to wonder around - given his gargantuan size I'm sure he should really be dwarfing everything else.
Simply put: can you make the logo bigger!?
I agree with others about the contrast. Great first draft and first shot!
I'll definitely sort the contrast between the penguin and the outlines, and I've got a couple of ideas to make the penguin more... well, massive.
I'm considering separating out the text from the logo (as this allows for more flexibility in the type), so I'll post up a revised version when I have the chance to work on this again...
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Mike Armstrong
Well here's my first shot - the logo for my company. It's a first draft, so any feedback's gratefully received...
11 months ago
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Liz Nugent
I think it's adorable! Maybe up the contrast between the lines and the dark part of the penguin because it's hard to see the eye?
It has such a nice shape :)
11 months ago
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Tim Marshall
Loving it. Goofy, cute, badass, all at the same time.
11 months ago
Nice!
11 months ago
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Alden Haley
haha nice. The eye is def pretty hard to see and the contrast between the penguin and the background is a bit low. Hope that helps.
Welcome to dribbble!
11 months ago
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Jackson Howell
Love him! Can he be more massive? Seems to have far too much space in there to wonder around - given his gargantuan size I'm sure he should really be dwarfing everything else.
Simply put: can you make the logo bigger!?
I agree with others about the contrast. Great first draft and first shot!
11 months ago
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Sascha M. Trinkaus
Massive penguin is massive⦠and awesome!! Totally loving him :D
11 months ago
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Mike Armstrong
Thanks for the comments everyone!
I'll definitely sort the contrast between the penguin and the outlines, and I've got a couple of ideas to make the penguin more... well, massive.
I'm considering separating out the text from the logo (as this allows for more flexibility in the type), so I'll post up a revised version when I have the chance to work on this again...
11 months ago
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Sascha M. Trinkaus
Looking forward to the changes Mike.
11 months ago
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Massive Penguin logo - variation
by Mike Armstrong
Altered version of the logo - clearer type, revised colours (for separation) and a (slightly) more massive penguin.
11 months ago