404 Page - WIP

5 Responses

1. Pro Margs Plaisted

   Concept for a 404 page.

   The lighting still needs work and the boxes need to be roughened up a bit. Still trying to think of something witty to say... any ideas?

   11 months ago

2. Pro Keith Frawley

   Very clever!

   11 months ago

3. Pro Margs Plaisted

   Thanks Keith!

   11 months ago

4. Pro Chris Silverman

   The concept is awesome. I really like it. The boxes came out nicely, too.

   The elements feel sort of flat, and I think having the boxes cast a shadow on the wall might help with that, but you said you were working on this. Also, some of the concave elements, like one of the sliders in the back, feels like it's embedded in the wall.

   How about some dripping pipes at the top of the page, to round out the janitor's-closet feel? :)

   11 months ago

5. Pro Margs Plaisted

   Thanks for the great feedback Chris!

   Yes, agreed on the concave elements, I need to add the shadows and lighting to make them stand out from the wall... or maybe just move their positions.

   This is a small crop of the whole page, it's like you're looking at the back of the interface, there will also be a power socket and cords. It does need to be roughed up a bit though, will try out the dripping pipes idea, maybe add a spiders web...

   Thanks again!

   11 months ago