So for the information on the back of the UP invite, I went for something that still kept with the vintage feel of the movie but that was more for a girl.
Looking good. I think there may be a little too many elements. Perhaps removing the bottom horizontal rules and adding the dots to the "staff" shapes like they are at top. Just an idea.
Good Idea! there is actually more info on the bottom of the lines so it was working as a divider. The info was just the address and such and I didn't want to post it up! But I'll deff give it a try :)
I love the feeling on this, and great fonts. feels really fresh! I agree with Shane, there's a lot going on. would be cleaner for example to have "join us for" in the same type. or have "for" below on a separate row. gj! (:
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Danielle Torres
So for the information on the back of the UP invite, I went for something that still kept with the vintage feel of the movie but that was more for a girl.
11 months ago
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Shane Helm
Looking good. I think there may be a little too many elements. Perhaps removing the bottom horizontal rules and adding the dots to the "staff" shapes like they are at top. Just an idea.
11 months ago
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Danielle Torres
Good Idea! there is actually more info on the bottom of the lines so it was working as a divider. The info was just the address and such and I didn't want to post it up! But I'll deff give it a try :)
11 months ago
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Nick Slater
FRESH!
11 months ago
Nice layout. :)
11 months ago
I love the feeling on this, and great fonts. feels really fresh! I agree with Shane, there's a lot going on. would be cleaner for example to have "join us for" in the same type. or have "for" below on a separate row. gj! (:
11 months ago
This makes me want to go to Emily's birthday.
11 months ago
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Danielle Torres
@Mud! Haha thats great! Thanks so much :)
11 months ago
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Dennis Salvatier
Really very lovely.
10 months ago
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Matthew Hernandez
Really nice patterns
6 months ago