veryyy slick. The break in the C could flow a bit better to match the bar in the A. Also, I like the variant angle of the L's foot, but it may look better to keep that upward-right motion there as well.
I really dig this font. Are you working just on these letters as a logotype or are you producing the entire character palette?
@Trevor That was my approach on this one. Of course, the A and Y probably push it that way a little too much for this project. It was just an exploration, not a final by any means. Thanks for the critique.
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Starting some initial type designs for a business. Edit: Critiques are welcome.
almost 2 years ago
Yum!
almost 2 years ago
DAAAAYYUUUMM!!!!
...that's my critique.
almost 2 years ago
"S"exy :)
almost 2 years ago
This is great, Jake. Nice work!
almost 2 years ago
Cool work Jake. I like how the oblique cuts at the end of the S and C mimic the diagonals on the A's. It looks really neat.
almost 2 years ago
veryyy slick. The break in the C could flow a bit better to match the bar in the A. Also, I like the variant angle of the L's foot, but it may look better to keep that upward-right motion there as well.
I really dig this font. Are you working just on these letters as a logotype or are you producing the entire character palette?
almost 2 years ago
Probably just a logotype. I have been altering letters from the typeface Knockout to get the exact feel for it.
Thanks Josh for the critique. I will play with those angles.
almost 2 years ago
It's super nice, but it looks very Bauhaus/Deco - is that the feel you want for a business called Catalyst (sounds techy)?
almost 2 years ago
@Trevor That was my approach on this one. Of course, the A and Y probably push it that way a little too much for this project. It was just an exploration, not a final by any means. Thanks for the critique.
almost 2 years ago
By all means dude! You nailed the aesthetic convincingly.
almost 2 years ago
Great flow all the way around Jake. Good stuff man.
almost 2 years ago
Really solid. I think the L looks good how it is. Gives good balance.
almost 2 years ago
I love the slanted crossbeam on the A
almost 2 years ago
SOLD.
almost 2 years ago
sexy.
almost 2 years ago
Looking good Jake!
almost 2 years ago
Thanks for the love.
almost 2 years ago
Love the type homie!
almost 2 years ago
i like it... color, depth, and texture
almost 2 years ago
sooo slick. love it
almost 2 years ago
Rebound
Catalyst 2
by Jake Dugard
Continuing to experiment with this identity I'm working on. Feedback appreciated.
almost 2 years ago