Thanks Paul, I agree that it could be thicker. I find with #2 I read it "NZ ltd precision quality construction" and it throws me a little. Is it just me?
I'm digging #1 of these comps. It's got good visual organization of importance, and would recommend exploring some additional ways of representing "Quality Construction". Also, the NZ LTD feels like it wants be some sort of label, so it might be worth exploring the approach from #3 more. Great type studies here!
I agree with you about #2, reading it as "NZ Ltd Precision...", and with Gerren that maybe exploring #3 some more would be good – I'm thinking you could try overlaying the NZ Ltd tag from #3 down over the center of the lower bar maybe? Then it would read in the right order. Really liking these so far :)
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I like number 2 the best, but wonder if the "quality construction" font could do with being a little thicker?
about 2 years ago
Thanks Paul, I agree that it could be thicker. I find with #2 I read it "NZ ltd precision quality construction" and it throws me a little. Is it just me?
about 2 years ago
See what you mean now. Have you tried a slightly smaller size and putting "Quality Construction NZ Ltd" on the bottom line.
about 2 years ago
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Gerren Lamson
I'm digging #1 of these comps. It's got good visual organization of importance, and would recommend exploring some additional ways of representing "Quality Construction". Also, the NZ LTD feels like it wants be some sort of label, so it might be worth exploring the approach from #3 more. Great type studies here!
about 2 years ago
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Mike Harding
I agree with you about #2, reading it as "NZ Ltd Precision...", and with Gerren that maybe exploring #3 some more would be good – I'm thinking you could try overlaying the NZ Ltd tag from #3 down over the center of the lower bar maybe? Then it would read in the right order. Really liking these so far :)
about 2 years ago
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Ismael Burciaga
Nice. Have you tried the shadow going to the right?
about 2 years ago
not the top.
both #2 and #3 are strong.
maybe think about if the decorative parts will 'always' be included.
3 months ago