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Apple Eve Logo [Final]

14 Responses

  1. Pro Portrait1 Graham Smith

    This should be close to final artwork now. Took some of the previous comments to heart, such as looking at fonts and also cleaning up the vector work in the apple and 'Eve'.

    If you still feel aspects look 'odd/wrong' please let me know, I am VERY open to thoughts and views. :)

    So have used a slightly heavier font, previous was too thin and open when sat next to the heavy Apple. The ampersand is a 'custom' tweak. Also raised the wording up from the Apples baseline for possible tag line.

    Have tweaked the shape of the Apple, less pronounced curves top and bottom, to further move away from 'Apple Inc' logo. The human form has also been tweaked, neck, breasts and legs. Slight repositioning of the leaves as well.

    almost 2 years ago

  2. Pro Photo Russell Bishop

    Lovely stuff!

    almost 2 years ago

  3. Pro Avatar Chris Rowe

    What Russell said, really digging it! Have you decided on any colours yet?

    almost 2 years ago

  4. Pro Portrait1 Graham Smith

    Chris : Client will be printing on some tasty luxurious stock and will be printing in a green ink of sorts, details yet to be confirmed.

    The problem is, green seems to lessen the impact of the logo quite considerably, so the right hue is important.

    almost 2 years ago

  5. Pro Davykestens4 Davy Kestens

    Way better, congrats! The heavier font balances it out.

    almost 2 years ago

  6. Pro Tingo Rogie

    Graham, awesome work brother! Glad I drafted ya! Keep knockin' it out.

    Oh...and one last thing. I'm sure it's totally cool, but that Trajan ampersand always has bothered me. It looks like a spear — not feminine.

    almost 2 years ago

  7. Pro Jake_color_sq Jake Stutzman

    Beautiful. I would love to see the woman figure as the ampersand too. Of course that'd be a bit redundant. But it would work as a separate treatment.

    over 1 year ago

  8. Pro Aran Aran Down

    Typography is just spot on perfect. Love everything about this!

    over 1 year ago

  9. Pro Aran Aran Down

    What font did you use as a base? Really really dig.

    likes

    over 1 year ago

  10. Dk_avator Dasha

    This is really lovely! great job!

    over 1 year ago

  11. Pro Portrait1 Graham Smith

    Aran : the font is Spira Bold, and the ampersand is Trajan, but have since changed it from trajan.

    dasha : Thank you, took some time to get this one just right, but very pleased with the end result.

    over 1 year ago

  12. Portrait1

    This final version shows the logo in colour, with an example of the paper stock that the stationery will be printed on etc.

    Thanks to @RogieKing for basically telling me my previous choice of ampersand 'sucked', we now have a nice new ampersand based on Meno Bold. :)

    Logo process post on my blog if anyone is interested : Apple & Eve Logo Process Post

    Awesome project, made so much better through the constructive comments here on Dribbble

    over 1 year ago

  13. Brian-schwartz3 Brian Schwartz

    Dug the blog post on the process you went through on this one.

    over 1 year ago

  14. Dk_avator Dasha

    Looks awesome! The new ampersand looks just right - great change. Reading your blog post about it :) thanks for sharing.

    over 1 year ago

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