Hey thank you! I appreciate the feedback. Are you referring to the heron? or the "Society Of Ohio" as well? Since I uploaded this shot I have opened the kerning up a bit on the type... that did help with legibility. I will have to play with the size of the of A. I know at a certain point it will have to become a solid "A" or drop off and be just the wordmark. You can see the most recent here http://www.behance.net/gallery/Audubon-of-Ohio-Corporate-Identity/1689896
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Hi AJ!I think that the details are too small. Have tried it in small dimension?
11 months ago
Hey thank you! I appreciate the feedback. Are you referring to the heron? or the "Society Of Ohio" as well? Since I uploaded this shot I have opened the kerning up a bit on the type... that did help with legibility. I will have to play with the size of the of A. I know at a certain point it will have to become a solid "A" or drop off and be just the wordmark. You can see the most recent here http://www.behance.net/gallery/Audubon-of-Ohio-Corporate-Identity/1689896
11 months ago
Hi AJ, yes i'm talking about Heron. Typography, for me, is ok.
11 months ago
Ok thanks! ill see what i can do
11 months ago
Rebound
Audubon One Color
by Arnaldo Jimenez (A.J.)
Made the Heron a heavy weight vs a middle weight. I thickened up the strokes of the feathers also extending him outside of the A bit more.
11 months ago