Tim, you're totally right, dude. I'm not happy with the way they look now, regardless of size. I think I might need to use stroked paths, in the same vein as your finely honed style. I'll post another iteration tomorrow.
@Morgan I really dig how the clouds are overlapping each other, it's really playful. I think trying to make those clouds a bit bigger, and working out the small ones, can fix your problem. Also Charlie's suggestion of making the rocket a bit bigger might be pretty awesome. Either way, great work man!
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Morgan Allan Knutson
I'm experimenting with various things for our brand. Inspiration comes from here which was kindly pointed out to me by Riley Cran.
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11 months ago
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I'm Charlie
This is much better Morgan! ;-)
11 months ago
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Tim Boelaars
Love this one Morgan.
11 months ago
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Morgan Allan Knutson
Thanks guys! Anything you'd do differently Tim?
11 months ago
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Miro Keller
This one! Fo sho!
11 months ago
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Stéphane Reverdy
Love the smoke.
11 months ago
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Max Steenbergen
I love this. Immediately thought "Wow" the moment I saw it.
11 months ago
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Tim Boelaars
@Morgan Maybe simplify those clouds a bit for small sizes?
11 months ago
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Birgit Zimmermann
looking pretty good! the only thing I would point out, like Tim, is how good it will look in a small size.
11 months ago
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Morgan Allan Knutson
Tim, you're totally right, dude. I'm not happy with the way they look now, regardless of size. I think I might need to use stroked paths, in the same vein as your finely honed style. I'll post another iteration tomorrow.
11 months ago
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Will Hindson
Love the feel of this
11 months ago
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DÓRI
love this, looks very good
11 months ago
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I'm Charlie
@Tim @Morgan Tim is totally right like you said, but what about that racket? maybe little bit larger? maybe use some perspective for this.
11 months ago
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Tim Boelaars
@Morgan I really dig how the clouds are overlapping each other, it's really playful. I think trying to make those clouds a bit bigger, and working out the small ones, can fix your problem. Also Charlie's suggestion of making the rocket a bit bigger might be pretty awesome. Either way, great work man!
11 months ago
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Simon Foster
This is a winner, I agree with Tim, sort the clouds out a bit for small sizes and you're there :)
11 months ago
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Brand Winnie
This is much better than the first concept. Diggggggin.
11 months ago
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Andreas Fluge Iden
This is just incredible! Nice work man
11 months ago
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Rok Benedik
+1 what Tim and Charlie suggested. What about mirroring cloud shapes, so the whole logo would be symmetrical?
Otherwise, A+ :)
11 months ago
gorgeous!
reminds me of marc newson's cloud pullover for g-star.
11 months ago
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Milosz Klimek
Agree with the dudes above, this is great and you could make those clouds even better. :-)
11 months ago
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Peter Butler
Beautiful!
11 months ago
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Emil Bonsaksen
Oh my god this is incredibly awesome!
11 months ago
Love this!
11 months ago
3, 2, 1, awesome!
11 months ago
I really like where this is going. Good work!
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