I just saved the date :) ...wait a minute something tells me this wasn't an invite for dribbble users ha in any event it looks like it's coming along well I'd add some spacing below the "He asked" to give room for the "Together they'll"
John, generally speaking I tend to think of type treatments like this as logo lockups, not as fodder for perfect grammar—it needs to function aesthetically and it needs to be readable with good hierarchy. If being grammatically correct in regards to punctuation throws off the aesthetic, I'll stick with looking right over being technically right.
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...sometimes you just have to admit that Archer is the right font choice.
almost 2 years ago
I just saved the date :) ...wait a minute something tells me this wasn't an invite for dribbble users ha in any event it looks like it's coming along well I'd add some spacing below the "He asked" to give room for the "Together they'll"
almost 2 years ago
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Mike Meyer
I love the concise copy.
almost 2 years ago
brb licking my laptop screen
almost 2 years ago
Nice, very nice! Love the use of black type on a colourful image.
almost 2 years ago
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Andy Birchwood
should the S and Y be capitalised?
almost 2 years ago
Psh, Museo Slab is soooo much better.
Awesome job on this; the background is so appropriate, and so perfectly balanced with the content. Love it.
almost 2 years ago
Follow up: my "sarcasm" html tag for my Museo Slab comment didn't show up. #FYI.
almost 2 years ago
The "S" yes, since it's the beginning of a sentence. The "Y" was an aesthetic decision so nothing dropped below the baseline.
almost 2 years ago
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Matthew Smith
Lovely.
almost 2 years ago
...sometimes you just have to admit that H&F really make our life beautiful :)
almost 2 years ago
Beautiful. If I may stickle: your first two sentences at the bottom end with punctuation, but your third one doesn't.
almost 2 years ago
John, generally speaking I tend to think of type treatments like this as logo lockups, not as fodder for perfect grammar—it needs to function aesthetically and it needs to be readable with good hierarchy. If being grammatically correct in regards to punctuation throws off the aesthetic, I'll stick with looking right over being technically right.
All that to say, yes, it does, intentionally. :)
almost 2 years ago
youve inspired me
almost 2 years ago
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Zach McNair
ARCHER!
Question.. Should "Yes" and "I Do" be in quotes?
almost 2 years ago
Zach, see my previous comment.
almost 2 years ago