Looking pretty good. Have you played around with adding any texture to it? Also, the shield on the car, is that shadow suppose to be like that? I think this works well.
I would have to agree that the front wheel looks a little off due to it's angle. I'd suggest angling it back a little more towards "straight". Also, the back wheel looks a little blocky compared to the curvature of the front wheel and I can see the back, shaded portion dipping in a bit that makes it feel hollow.
Overall all though Rogie, this is looking awesome bro. Great feedback from the client too!
Phil and da boys, Yes, the axle is definitely off and the two wheels don't match entirely. Thanks for the keen eyes on that — will do on making them match better.
Comin' down hard on ya today aren't they Rogie? I like it. Looks like you're going for that imperfect style and I really think it works. I would agree with the front wheel being off a bit, and maybe the shadow on the shield, unless you want it to look like it's fallin off the truck. :D But I like it overall. You have a very distinct style, good work.
This is FANTASTIC Rogie! It'll be even more cool when we get to see the full update for Mimi.
Got one thought: is the shield towards the back of the truck supposed to look like it's actually a mounted shield or is it supposed to be more of a logo? Right now, to me, it looks like a physical object that's sticking off the truck. That is all. Great work man
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Rogie
Some more illustration work for Mad Mimi. Best thing is the client said that they wanted to Marry it. That's a dang good review.
about 2 years ago
Love these!
about 2 years ago
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Kyle Steed
Is that a hub cap on the front wheel? It still feels a little "peg-legish". Everything else I hate.
about 2 years ago
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Rogie
Wow Kyle, that was pretty harsh. I know you are legit and a really great designer and all, but c'mon. I could use a little love.
about 2 years ago
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Kyle Steed
I don't think there's a button for "love"
about 2 years ago
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Patrick Algrim
Looking pretty good. Have you played around with adding any texture to it? Also, the shield on the car, is that shadow suppose to be like that? I think this works well.
about 2 years ago
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Liam McKay
Really loving the illustration work you've shared with us recently.
about 2 years ago
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Paul Ungureanu
The axel on the front wheel is not right...
about 2 years ago
I think the axel on the front wheel is perfect, Rog. Much love to you, brother. Brilliant work, as always.
ps - Love the shield/badge background pattern.
about 2 years ago
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Phil Coffman
I would have to agree that the front wheel looks a little off due to it's angle. I'd suggest angling it back a little more towards "straight". Also, the back wheel looks a little blocky compared to the curvature of the front wheel and I can see the back, shaded portion dipping in a bit that makes it feel hollow.
Overall all though Rogie, this is looking awesome bro. Great feedback from the client too!
about 2 years ago
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Dave Mott
Excellent font choice here!
about 2 years ago
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Rogie
Phil and da boys, Yes, the axle is definitely off and the two wheels don't match entirely. Thanks for the keen eyes on that — will do on making them match better.
about 2 years ago
I love the off angles on the truck. sooo nice.
about 2 years ago
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Chandler Van De Water
Looks good, broseph. Make sure you spell "arrive" properly in the final product. ;)
about 2 years ago
Whoa!
Nuff' said.
about 2 years ago
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David Perel
Epic lol @kylesteed
about 2 years ago
Comin' down hard on ya today aren't they Rogie? I like it. Looks like you're going for that imperfect style and I really think it works. I would agree with the front wheel being off a bit, and maybe the shadow on the shield, unless you want it to look like it's fallin off the truck. :D But I like it overall. You have a very distinct style, good work.
about 2 years ago
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Rogie
@Jared Designers are critics and that's not always a bad thing...it's in their blood. They just wanna pwn other people's designs.
about 2 years ago
How well I know. It's good to have experienced people critiquing instead of a client that has no idea what they are talking about. :D
about 2 years ago
Agree that the wheel is a little awkward, but overall very nice!
about 2 years ago
The shield wins it for me. And the boxes, those too.
about 2 years ago
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Matthew Smith
well done bro! So much fun. LOVE this.
about 2 years ago
This is FANTASTIC Rogie! It'll be even more cool when we get to see the full update for Mimi.
Got one thought: is the shield towards the back of the truck supposed to look like it's actually a mounted shield or is it supposed to be more of a logo? Right now, to me, it looks like a physical object that's sticking off the truck. That is all. Great work man
about 2 years ago
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Krystyn Heide
...the client said that they wanted to Marry it.
Ha, that's the best kind of client. :)
about 2 years ago
Love it Rogie. Nice work.
about 2 years ago