I think that the idea is great. However, it needs some work. The handle has ugly edges (because of the little angle), have you tried to make the handle as regular rectangle? Also, if the machine was in black, the metal parts would shine a bit more.
Great work anyway.
This is the sketch I did before switching to Fireworks. I did it on the iPad using Adobe Ideas and a stylus. This is a efficient and fun way to help the client to choose from various drafts.
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Pavel Maček
I think that the idea is great. However, it needs some work. The handle has ugly edges (because of the little angle), have you tried to make the handle as regular rectangle? Also, if the machine was in black, the metal parts would shine a bit more.
Great work anyway.
12 months ago
Thanks for your comment, I’ll try the handle thing, it looks really rough ...
thanks
12 months ago
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Oliver Twardowski
Hi Martin,
Ich glaube auch, dass das Metal noch etwas mehr Reflektion vertragen könnte. Außerdem ist der Schatten der Schaumdüse etwas zu gleichmäßig, denke ich.
Das Konzept und den Aufbau des Icons finde ich sehr gelungen. Würde mich freuen bald eine überarbeitete Version sehen zu dürfen.
Viele Grüße aus Köln, Oliver
P.S.: Willkommen bei Dribbble!
12 months ago
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Maxime De Greve ✈
Great first shot Martin boy! ;)
12 months ago
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Alden Haley
the shadows kind of blend in with the objects casting them on the ipad and iphone size icons. Welcome to Dribbble!
12 months ago
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Coffee Icon Sketch
by Martin Thiemann
This is the sketch I did before switching to Fireworks. I did it on the iPad using Adobe Ideas and a stylus. This is a efficient and fun way to help the client to choose from various drafts.
11 months ago