This is really, really nice! The only thing is I would make the lighter text a darker color, or maybe make it bold instead of it being a different color?
Very, very nice for a first attempt! Maybe add a bit of line height, as the 'P' and 'F' are running into each other on the left edge, as well as the 'Y' and 'L' towards the middle of the same line.
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Nur Fathihah
First attempt at creating a flyer design.
12 months ago
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John Tidey
This is really, really nice! The only thing is I would make the lighter text a darker color, or maybe make it bold instead of it being a different color?
12 months ago
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Ted Goas
Very, very nice for a first attempt! Maybe add a bit of line height, as the 'P' and 'F' are running into each other on the left edge, as well as the 'Y' and 'L' towards the middle of the same line.
12 months ago
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Nur Fathihah
@John, @Ted: Thanks guys for the feedback! They're really important as this is my first time designing a flyer :)
12 months ago
Really like the typography you have used
12 months ago
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Nur Fathihah
@Jack: Thanks. It's St Marie :)
12 months ago