Refining the head shape to be less wide. Possibly "existing" is too far to the right — what do you fine folks think?
12 months ago
I think it's fine the way it is, personally. If it's bugging you just add another small bit of hair in the back there to add a bit more space.
The "a" seems to get lost to me. So I first read it as, "Being alive is pre-existing condition."
I think this looks great. Personally I didn't lose the a, but I'd ask around and see if anyone else misreads it, too
10 months ago
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Dave Rau
Refining the head shape to be less wide. Possibly "existing" is too far to the right — what do you fine folks think?
12 months ago
I think it's fine the way it is, personally. If it's bugging you just add another small bit of hair in the back there to add a bit more space.
12 months ago
The "a" seems to get lost to me. So I first read it as, "Being alive is pre-existing condition."
12 months ago
I think this looks great. Personally I didn't lose the a, but I'd ask around and see if anyone else misreads it, too
10 months ago