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Pre-existing condition

4 Responses

  1. Pro D Dave Rau

    Refining the head shape to be less wide. Possibly "existing" is too far to the right — what do you fine folks think?

    12 months ago

  2. Avatar-dribbble Dustin Wilson

    I think it's fine the way it is, personally. If it's bugging you just add another small bit of hair in the back there to add a bit more space.

    12 months ago

  3. 11244_215194989201_505569201_4162805_3616843_n Shane Guymon

    The "a" seems to get lost to me. So I first read it as, "Being alive is pre-existing condition."

    12 months ago

  4. Pj-logo-dribbble PJ McCormick

    I think this looks great. Personally I didn't lose the a, but I'd ask around and see if anyone else misreads it, too

    10 months ago

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