Shelfluv Homepage

8 Responses

1. Pro Pek Pongpaet

   The current ShelfLuv homepage. Feels a little wordy up top. http://www.shelfluv.com

   12 months ago

2. Pro Brady J. Frey

   I agree on the wordy. I'd think the bold description should be one line, two tops. Why not:
   A place for book lovers to share and discover.

   You can also say book lovers and readers; but that and the rest of the sentence are redundant.

   The word share does not need an elaboration such as 'with their friends' and discover does not need 'new books'. If I'm online, of course I'd be sharing with my friends, or not, however I want:). And assuming it's a book sharing site, I already assume what I discover is new books.

   12 months ago

3. Pro Brady J. Frey

   Or:
   A place for book lovers to share and discover books.

   12 months ago

4. Pro Brady J. Frey

   I forgot to note, I continue to love the design and I think it's looking fantastic; it's inviting and I get excited to see more of the app by the home page. Just didn't want all my constructive criticism to be about fixing:).

   doughahn.net is a good content writer/editor for hire, and he's taking on a couple new clients still, I believe, if you need.

   12 months ago

5. Pro Pek Pongpaet

   Thanks Brady - the feedback is greatly appreciated. I'm updating the homepage based on your recommendation.

   12 months ago

6. Pro Brady J. Frey

   You're welcome, always happy to help, it looks great:)

   12 months ago

7. Andy Birchwood

   Wanted: Economic copy writing brain to make web less tedious.
   Good job both!
   Pek- I'd love a touchy-feely rollover & active state on your "Join now" button...

   12 months ago

8. Pro Pek Pongpaet

   hey Andy

   Yes, people have complained that the Join button is weak. Do you have any examples that inspire you?

   12 months ago