I love this! You could try having the s in lower case cursive? The o is in cursive technically so it might add a little bit of continuity between the two. I like the s this way too, tho. Looks great!
@Penny yeah, I think the 'o' has been on a diet, definitely needs plumping up!
@John I've been tinkering with the weight of the loop in the A, and I think it works a lot better when the loop isn't as heavy. Makes it a little more balanced I feel. Thanks :)
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Marc Thomas
First ever go at creating script type. I really like the 'A' but not so keen on the s.
Anybody have any tips on how I could improve it?
about 1 year ago
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Brandon Labbé
I love this! You could try having the s in lower case cursive? The o is in cursive technically so it might add a little bit of continuity between the two. I like the s this way too, tho. Looks great!
about 1 year ago
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Marc Thomas
Thanks Brandon. Lowercase 'S' is like my kryptonite. I'll give cursive a go, and try to not make it look utterly terrible!
about 1 year ago
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Brandon Labbé
The letter s in general is my kryptonite. I look forward to seeing what you come up with, im sure it will be fantastic!
about 1 year ago
This looks great! The "o" looks a bit thin in comparison to the other letters though.
about 1 year ago
maybe you could flip the "weight" of the A, making the thicker arm on the right and vice versa.
about 1 year ago
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Marc Thomas
@Penny yeah, I think the 'o' has been on a diet, definitely needs plumping up!
@John I've been tinkering with the weight of the loop in the A, and I think it works a lot better when the loop isn't as heavy. Makes it a little more balanced I feel. Thanks :)
about 1 year ago
Rebound
Possibly the worst 'S' in the history of the written word
by Marc Thomas
I know the S sucks majorly, but I've gone for a more cursive approach for this. Quite enjoying the lowercase R.
Any tips on how to draw an S would be awesome! Thanks guys.
about 1 year ago
I love the typeface!.
11 months ago