Yeah, sorry. Shoulda been clearer about that. Stands out in a bad way. If you can shift the shapes a little (I assume they're multiplied), I think it would resolve the issue.
I'm really enjoying this. It gives an interesting sense of depth in some places.
Maybe see how bringing the rectangle that is creating the vertical line up a little bit, so it isn't coming over half of the shapes under it. That is the only overlap that I think could be fixed. Otherwise this is really nice. I love this color palette.
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Scott Hill
Working on some brand buildout/collateral. Really liking where it's headed.
about 2 years ago
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Ricky Linn
Oh man that is killer stuff.
about 2 years ago
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Evan Stremke
Love the colors, man. The only thing that stands out is the vertical blue line off to the left.
about 2 years ago
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Scott Hill
Evan - Vertical line bad or good? I was wondering about it myself. Lose it?
about 2 years ago
I say lose it. Everything else looks super! Lots of energy for only using rectangular shapes
about 2 years ago
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55 Hi's
i love your overprint stuff, you have it on lockdown
about 2 years ago
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The Fox And King
Yeah I would lose that line - otherwise, very nostalgic feeling, which is only a good thing!
about 2 years ago
Real good man, nice.
about 2 years ago
Killer colors. Loose the vertical, looks a bit like a mistake unless there's more of it in the rest of the piece.
about 2 years ago
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Evan Stremke
Yeah, sorry. Shoulda been clearer about that. Stands out in a bad way. If you can shift the shapes a little (I assume they're multiplied), I think it would resolve the issue.
about 2 years ago
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Joaquim Marques Nielsen
Pretty neat, with slight references to http://bit.ly/kNizSs
about 2 years ago
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Justin Pervorse
love the colors on this
about 2 years ago
Love it. I agree the vertical lines need to bed fixed though. Kick ass none the less...
about 2 years ago
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Matt Thompson
I'm really enjoying this. It gives an interesting sense of depth in some places.
Maybe see how bringing the rectangle that is creating the vertical line up a little bit, so it isn't coming over half of the shapes under it. That is the only overlap that I think could be fixed. Otherwise this is really nice. I love this color palette.
about 2 years ago
Sweet—please tell me this is for a Piet Mondrian LEGO line.
about 2 years ago
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David Cran
Mondriantastic.
about 2 years ago
I would get rid of the vertical line too. Other than that, this is the s&!t man.
about 2 years ago
Reminds me of my childhood for some reason...in a good way. The colors are fantastic.
about 2 years ago
its playful, but restrained. very nice
about 2 years ago
lovely color!
about 2 years ago
I don't care if it is clichéd, Futura truly is my favourite typeface.
Love the colours in this piece as well.
about 2 years ago
!facepalm¡
brilliant.
about 2 years ago
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Michael Spitz
Awesome stuff Scott! Lose the vert line > gold.
about 2 years ago
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Raja Sandhu
I love where its headin too
about 2 years ago
nice kerning on the text
almost 2 years ago