@George this is actually for a client in Sweden which has a clothing store, but she didn't decided yet, but I guess she will probably print this one if she sees it and put it into a golden frame or something like that! :)
I think R,U,N should look more similar, the sharp point on the O should be smooth and that the V should be worked in more into the typography. It stands out in a way.
But I like where you going with this one. Keep it up!
I like the merging of the y and the g to form the other letters, I like to do that as well but sometimes struggle with legibility. I could definitely read it from the thumbnail :) Lovely design!
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Daniel Keller
you might be already tired to see this type over and over again, I'm satisfied with the result and I think it's pretty much finished.
I followed Claire Coullon's advice and made the connections of o-r and o-u more smooth!
go Back and Forth to see the changes.
about 2 years ago
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Michael Spitz
Yep, nice update Daniel.
about 2 years ago
Bearably readable (the f,o,y situation), but still very nice.
about 2 years ago
Nicely done Daniel! It's been great seeing this develop.
about 2 years ago
Even better dude loving this! Is this a personal project or for a client?
about 2 years ago
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Daniel Keller
thanks everyone :)
@George this is actually for a client in Sweden which has a clothing store, but she didn't decided yet, but I guess she will probably print this one if she sees it and put it into a golden frame or something like that! :)
about 2 years ago
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Alexander Wende
wow, looked at all rebounds, great outcome!
about 2 years ago
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Daniel Keller
thank you Alexander!
about 2 years ago
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Tobias Svenlöv
It's going well!
I think R,U,N should look more similar, the sharp point on the O should be smooth and that the V should be worked in more into the typography. It stands out in a way.
But I like where you going with this one. Keep it up!
about 2 years ago
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Daniel Keller
thanks Mike, I will think about your suggestions when I will work on this again!
about 2 years ago
Pretty cool... sure is purrdy.
over 1 year ago
This is beautiful.
over 1 year ago
This is awesome.. But I read Fyoung orever.. But still awesome!
over 1 year ago
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TAS
nice !!
over 1 year ago
I like the merging of the y and the g to form the other letters, I like to do that as well but sometimes struggle with legibility. I could definitely read it from the thumbnail :) Lovely design!
over 1 year ago
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Daniel Keller
thank you for the nice words Faheema, I apreciate it, you have some amazing works!
over 1 year ago
You are welcome, and thank you too! :)
over 1 year ago