I like the red folded element on the left side of the card (although the drop shadow should extend slightly to the right of it as well IMO, based on your light source).
However the 3D nature of the red bit makes the black text appear as if it's floating, a little. Perhaps texture the paper slightly and add a discrete text embossing to make the whole thing feel more 3-dimensional and like a real object, which would make the elements work better together.
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My vCard design for 2011. It's live: www.michaljach.pl
about 2 years ago
I like the red folded element on the left side of the card (although the drop shadow should extend slightly to the right of it as well IMO, based on your light source).
However the 3D nature of the red bit makes the black text appear as if it's floating, a little. Perhaps texture the paper slightly and add a discrete text embossing to make the whole thing feel more 3-dimensional and like a real object, which would make the elements work better together.
about 2 years ago
Thanks for Your feedback. I'm going to work this out.
about 2 years ago
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Natan Nikolic
The live version doesn't work. Looking nice although I'd decrease line-height and double the left padding. Welcome to dribble.
about 2 years ago
Live version is back online - there was a problem with www prefix. Enjoy !
about 2 years ago