FB Script Monogram

Fbmono

16 Responses

  1. Pro Henric Sjösten Henric Sjösten

    Custom hand lettered monogram. Does it read well?

    about 2 years ago

  2. Ivan Bobrov Ivan Bobrov

    Readable.

    about 2 years ago

  3. Pro Muhammad Ali Effendy Muhammad Ali Effendy

    It perfectly reads "FB".

    about 2 years ago

  4. Pro Farzad Ban Farzad Ban

    I would say no. I read F3. But I love the custom type.

    about 2 years ago

  5. Pro Sean Farrell Sean Farrell

    I read FS first, but also F3

    If you extend the backside of the B up more or even loop it around/behind the F

    about 2 years ago

  6. Pro Henric Sjösten Henric Sjösten

    Thanks a lot guys!

    I thought the F was gonna be the hardest to read :)
    Since the B is connected with its stem and all.

    I'll try that Sean! But with a slight fear that the F will get lost :)

    about 2 years ago

  7. Pro Dave Bailey Dave Bailey

    F is noticeable first because we read top to bottom and left to right. Agreed about the F3 comment, but it's a beautiful mark. Keep at it!

    about 2 years ago

  8. Ivan Bobrov Ivan Bobrov

    Hm, I agree with the guys about F3. This combination can be read here too.

    about 2 years ago

  9. Pro Mike Bruner Mike Bruner

    such nice flow. but yeah I saw F3 at first. but after I saw the "B" now that's all I see. I think you are so close. Love the look.

    about 2 years ago

  10. Pro Henric Sjösten Henric Sjösten

    Thanks for all the comments. Really helpful!

    I think this helped with the legibility, making the B look more like a B by closing the gap in the bottom a bit and just improving the overall B shape :)
    http://dl.dropbox.com/u/8658061/FB2.PNG

    Will try other suggestions in my sketch book!

    likes

    about 2 years ago

  11. Claire Coullon Claire Coullon

    This looks great, the strokes have such a nice, dynamic feel to them. Agree with the comments + suggestions on legibility and I like where you're going with the revision. Another possibility could be to enlarge and adjust the top loop of the B slightly so that it's more prominent.

    about 2 years ago

  12. Pro Henric Sjösten Henric Sjösten

    Thanks Claire! I did open up the top loop a bit in the revision, but might try some more! :)

    about 2 years ago

  13. Pro Julian Hrankov Julian Hrankov

    Liking the style and flow a lot. Still major readability issue for me - »F3« or »Fz« is all I can see here.

    about 2 years ago

  14. Steven Schroeder Steven Schroeder

    Really nice mark, but I read F3 initially

    about 2 years ago

  15. Pro Henric Sjösten Henric Sjösten

    Thanks y'all. This one got rejected tho.

    about 2 years ago

  16. New concept; frame, viewfinder, box.

    about 2 years ago

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