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Mars Motel

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  1. Blackandwhite Yaron Schoen

    This is a logo for a small development company. It's my first attempt at it. I wanted to avoid the obvious reference to Mars, so no 3d globes ect. Feel free to give feedback.

    about 2 years ago

  2. Blackandwhite Yaron Schoen

    This was in the mood board that the client provided

    about 2 years ago

  3. Blackandwhite Yaron Schoen

    Ops! I liked my own shot? That is a silly feature... Didnt mean to.

    about 2 years ago

  4. Pro Me Pete Lacey

    Has that great retro motel feeling about it..

    (You can still 'unlike' it - just hit 'like' again)

    about 2 years ago

  5. Pro Avatar Ian Storm Taylor

    The "M" in motel doesn't feel motel-y enough to me.

    It might just be personal opinion, but when I think of typical American signage, I think of sharp M's. (As in ones that have a sharp middle point.) Like the M's in Gotham or Interstate. I haven't quite decided but I think I also picture the point touching the baseline, so more like Interstate than Gotham.

    Also, I'm not sold on the long crossbar on the "T". If that change made the top of Motel a solid block I might not mind, but since there's still a gap on the other side of the "O" it feels awkward.

    about 2 years ago

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    I was thinkin' more like this...

    Also featuring slightly increased weight on the red and white strokes.

    about 2 years ago

  7. Blackandwhite Yaron Schoen

    Interesting point of view Ian. I actually kind of agree with you about the pointy M. Thx for the feedback!

    about 2 years ago

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