Great perspective overall, but I do have to agree with the guys saying the tic-tacs could be better. I would give them more of an inside shadow/glow. Also, it kind of ruins the effect if the candy fills the container perfectly. It might be better if you showed more of the container on either side, rather than just filling it with orange.
1) Since the box is transparent, you should be able to see the bottom edge on the back as well.
2) Doesn't only apply to where the arrow is pointing, but the shadow and lighting of the Tic Tacs is wrong. They look flat and aren't shiny at all ( http://www.redecker-herford.de/Bonbons/TicTacOrange2.jpg ). I don't think this needs further explanation, it's just a lot of work to make them look realistic.
3) The back part of the top is rounded (because the canvas is rounded as well), but the front part seems straight or only slightly rounded. You should make that part rounded as well.
18 Responses
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Rui
Container is done very well - good job. The tic tacs themselves however, feel very flat in comparison.
about 1 year ago
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Bady
Second to @Rui, the tictac in right/left side seems doesn't follow the right perspective? but over all I like it, great work Jackie! ;)
about 1 year ago
That looks great man. The agree with the guys the tactacs are weird but the box is incredible. Nice :)
about 1 year ago
Very cool :)
about 1 year ago
NOICE
about 1 year ago
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Giovanni Lauricella✎
Good Job!!
about 1 year ago
Clever
about 1 year ago
I like the orange ones better than the mint! :P
about 1 year ago
Great perspective overall, but I do have to agree with the guys saying the tic-tacs could be better. I would give them more of an inside shadow/glow. Also, it kind of ruins the effect if the candy fills the container perfectly. It might be better if you showed more of the container on either side, rather than just filling it with orange.
about 1 year ago
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Milosz Klimek
Love the box, however tic tacs could be smaller.
about 1 year ago
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Janik Baumgartner
Not sure if you want feedback, but here are my thoughts:
http://idzr.org/36x6
1) Since the box is transparent, you should be able to see the bottom edge on the back as well.
2) Doesn't only apply to where the arrow is pointing, but the shadow and lighting of the Tic Tacs is wrong. They look flat and aren't shiny at all ( http://www.redecker-herford.de/Bonbons/TicTacOrange2.jpg ). I don't think this needs further explanation, it's just a lot of work to make them look realistic.
3) The back part of the top is rounded (because the canvas is rounded as well), but the front part seems straight or only slightly rounded. You should make that part rounded as well.
about 1 year ago
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Dmitry Uvarov
haha - amazing!
about 1 year ago
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Jarad Johnson
Love the orange ones.
about 1 year ago
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Adam Fairhead
Nice work; I was eye'ing some of these up at the check outs in Win-Dixie earlier on. This is making me wish I'd picked up a pack ;)
about 1 year ago
An instant classic. Epic.
about 1 year ago
Rebound
Tic-Tac Spinach Box
by Jackie Tran
It was 3.15 AM here and I couldn't sleep so made this just for fun .
6 months ago
I love those little bastards
6 months ago
amazing!
about 1 month ago