Notefile Teaser

6 Responses

1. Pro Mike Piontek

   Working on a teaser page for my new app. With all the straight lines, the "Notefile" text looked really blurry no matter what I did with it. I ended up manually tweaking it in the end. I think I'm happy enough with it, but I'm worried it's actually too sharp now. Opinions? Did I ruin Futura?

   Next step: create some screenshots I don't mind sharing with the world.

   about 1 year ago

2. Vince Speelman

   I like the crispness, I'm just worried the "O" isn't crisp enough.

   about 1 year ago

3. Pro Mike Piontek

   Yeah, it's tricky. I sharpened it up as much as I could… If I pushed it any further it started to look jagged. I'll try messing with it a bit more though.

   about 1 year ago

4. Pro Alden Haley

   something about the kerning across the whole word doesnt feel right. NOT looks really wide and the rest looks really tight

   about 1 year ago

5. Pro Daniel Waldron

   The N and the O look really wide compared to the rest of the lettering, maybe elongate the "E" and "F" characters?

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   about 1 year ago

6. Pro Mike Piontek

   Thanks guys! I was reluctant to mess with the type even more—I kept it as close as possible while I was cleaning up the lines. But I tried making the T, E, F, and L a bit wider, tweaked the kerning, and I think I'm happy with it: http://notefileapp.com I also sharpened up the O just a little bit more.

   Feedback still welcome, I'm going to let it sit for a day or two before I make an official announcement.

   about 1 year ago