I think a mix between these two regarding the "hardness" of the edges would be awesome. Last one is a little bit to hard and this a bit to smooth (I think), nevertheless it still rocks!
The curves are awesome, though IMO the tail could be a bit thinner and/or longer.
Apart from the execution, which is again awesome, I do think this particular kind of silhouette is not all that original anymore. First thing that comes to mind is X-Men Phoenix/Jean Grey :) I'm sure you can come up with a different shape that just screams hawk
I agree with dove comment. Personally I like the first version better. I think the softness of the shapes on this one contribute to the dove look. When I think of hawks I think of strength which the lines of the first version leans toward.
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Jord Riekwel
Still working on a hawk-ish logo for Marco Jardim (http://jard.im/).
The last version had too much of a WWII feel to it so I tweaked it to its current state.
I would love to get some feedback from you guys! (I love this community.) :)
about 2 years ago
I think a mix between these two regarding the "hardness" of the edges would be awesome. Last one is a little bit to hard and this a bit to smooth (I think), nevertheless it still rocks!
about 2 years ago
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Max Steenbergen
The curves are awesome, though IMO the tail could be a bit thinner and/or longer.
Apart from the execution, which is again awesome, I do think this particular kind of silhouette is not all that original anymore. First thing that comes to mind is X-Men Phoenix/Jean Grey :) I'm sure you can come up with a different shape that just screams hawk
about 2 years ago
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José
I think this one is absolute an improvement on the first one, really like the curves!
about 2 years ago
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Milosz Klimek
Looks better for me too, good job Jord.
about 2 years ago
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BBXWeb
Much better Jord!
about 2 years ago
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Michael Spitz
Looking good Jord!
about 2 years ago
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Anton Kudin
just googled some images of eagles and that silhouette looks more like a dove to me, Jord
add a beak http://cl.ly/5k9N
and more detail to the wings http://cl.ly/5k55
about 2 years ago
I agree with dove comment. Personally I like the first version better. I think the softness of the shapes on this one contribute to the dove look. When I think of hawks I think of strength which the lines of the first version leans toward.
about 2 years ago
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Sean Farrell
really good
about 2 years ago
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Supersteil
Lekkerrr!
about 2 years ago
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Deividas Bielskis
very good!:)
about 2 years ago
I really love this, the shape is amazing! I would just tweak the colors a bit to make it look a bit more like metal, maybe even chrome. :)
about 2 years ago
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Jared Granger
Well done Jord!
about 2 years ago
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Gert van Duinen
Hiyah! You nailed the tail? What did your client say?
about 2 years ago
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Bill S Kenney
Love this one!
about 2 years ago
Very good mark!
over 1 year ago