Jagatext3

4 Responses

  1. Jeremy Abel Jeremy Abel

    Any help on fixing that G? I've tried taking a slice out of it (like pizza), I've tried leaving it just a small indent, but it reads like a C then...

    about 2 years ago

  2. Rachel Nash Rachel Nash

    I'd bring in that top curve a little more and leave a little flat space at the bottom before it goes back up-- just giving the counterform a little more weight should clear up any legibility issues. Honestly though, I think it reads as a G pretty clearly already.

    about 2 years ago

  3. Ant Orant Ant Orant

    is this for jaga jazzist? double-like if so.

    re. the G, maybe try it rounded rather than tapered at the end, while keeping the corner intact? i think it looks ok as it is.

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    about 2 years ago

  4. Jeremy Abel Jeremy Abel

    Ant: Yes it is! It's for the concert poster for their upcoming NYC show.

    Thanks for the feedback; I'll keep fiddling with it

    about 2 years ago

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