WIP lettering for a magazine. Feedback is much appreciated.
2 months ago
What kind of surface treatment will you be doing to it?
This is coming along nicely Stacey. Seems like Punch could be kerned out, it seems a bit smushed in comparison to Fruit. I think that will really help the entire thing flow better and might allow you to make the 'P' a bit more prominent. Hope this helps, cheers!
@Bob Ewing Good call on adjusting the kerning. The 'P' has been giving me the most trouble. Thanks for the feedback!
@Stacey McClure Agree with @Bob Ewing on the Punch kerning. Have you played with opening up the bowl on the letter "P" more?
@Joshua Hynes I've gone back and forth on it. The larger it gets, the more it starts to look like a 'D.' But, I think if I adjust the kerning, I could open it up a little bit more.
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