About me page for my new portfolio website. Also you can learn more about me by reading the content of this page :) Check the attach.
3 months ago
I love that mug. Use it most every day.
Here's my critique:
1. The font sizes on some body elements are too big (i.e. Founded in April 2011...should be the same as "About Marion Pop" section.)
2. The line heights aren't all consistent. Some are good, but some, like the scripture verse, are too big.
3. The font itself seems a bit too thin or light, and not smooth (I know this will look different in-browser of course). I would perhaps try to mix the fonts up just a little more. You have the beginning of a nice mix between sans-serif and serif/slab, but I'd maybe make only the headings serif/slab, and the body sans-serif...or something like that.
Just my two cents. Great scripture verse. Keep up the good work.
Thanks for your feedback. I will consider your thoughts.
Love the mix of black, different shades of grey and red. Well done!
diggin the colors and the font choice, if i may suggest, i would lessen the font size of the testimonials, put them in a smaller category, make them a light grey and change your actual body type to that near black. good work :)
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