Overall I love the idea, but the lower part feels like the elements could have a bit more room to breathe. I'd probably also increase the contrast of the price at the bottom by just a notch to make it stand out a bit more. Same goes for the bg color for the select button. I love the concept and direction!
@Maleika! You might be right. I'm trying to make sure the whole packages apparatus fits on the screen at once which is why the elements may seem a little crowded. Perhaps I can reduce the size of the entire thing (still readable here when dramatically scaled down, after all) so that I can loosen it up a bit. And contrast may be a concern as well, you're right. I'll play! Thanks.
You're really on to something with this. Great colors. Only thing that could use some improvement in my opinion is; there's a lot going on per table column. Perhaps some elements could use more contrast (in shape, color and typeface) than others. At the moment everything seems equally important (in one column)
@Brian, Thanks, and yes, @Dan, it's Calgary Script!
@Yummygum Right. I also had it pointed out (off Dribbble) that this setup makes the cost the most emphasized differentiator instead of the amount of coffee, so the customer may think more in terms of what they want to spend instead of how much coffee they really need.
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Work in progress (+ prices not final), but what do you guys think of this as a way to choose how much coffee you'd like delivered to you every month?
about 1 year ago
Overall I love the idea, but the lower part feels like the elements could have a bit more room to breathe. I'd probably also increase the contrast of the price at the bottom by just a notch to make it stand out a bit more. Same goes for the bg color for the select button. I love the concept and direction!
about 1 year ago
@Maleika! You might be right. I'm trying to make sure the whole packages apparatus fits on the screen at once which is why the elements may seem a little crowded. Perhaps I can reduce the size of the entire thing (still readable here when dramatically scaled down, after all) so that I can loosen it up a bit. And contrast may be a concern as well, you're right. I'll play! Thanks.
about 1 year ago
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Brian Benitez
Love that font that the prices are set in. What is it?
about 1 year ago
Calgary Script | So sorry, couldn't help myself :)
about 1 year ago
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Yummygum
You're really on to something with this. Great colors. Only thing that could use some improvement in my opinion is; there's a lot going on per table column. Perhaps some elements could use more contrast (in shape, color and typeface) than others. At the moment everything seems equally important (in one column)
about 1 year ago
@Brian, Thanks, and yes, @Dan, it's Calgary Script!
@Yummygum Right. I also had it pointed out (off Dribbble) that this setup makes the cost the most emphasized differentiator instead of the amount of coffee, so the customer may think more in terms of what they want to spend instead of how much coffee they really need.
about 1 year ago