It looks pretty good. I do think the typefaces need work though. The "Y" doesn't really fit with the other letters. I'd say try doing the whole word in that cursive typeface and see how that looks. I'd also try playing with colors, I'm thinking a bright teal/aqua blue color might work for the "Youth" part. Try it on a pure white background so we can see the letters as they'd look on a page, too. Overall, it's great, and most people would love it as-is. I think if you try some of those things you can take it up a notch further. Keep it up!
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Trying out to create a logo for a non-profit organization. Mixed some font faces. Thoughts?
about 1 year ago
It looks pretty good. I do think the typefaces need work though. The "Y" doesn't really fit with the other letters. I'd say try doing the whole word in that cursive typeface and see how that looks. I'd also try playing with colors, I'm thinking a bright teal/aqua blue color might work for the "Youth" part. Try it on a pure white background so we can see the letters as they'd look on a page, too. Overall, it's great, and most people would love it as-is. I think if you try some of those things you can take it up a notch further. Keep it up!
about 1 year ago